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on some deleted poem
29 Oct 2003, 2:56 AM
You were not alone. You are together?
I am left not knowing where that foot is supposed to be placed.
Cutesy song.
Are not we getting a bit defensive? OOPS! I meant you. I am never too defensive.
Have to mark this with a vote. I get confused without my place markers. Ashamed I am to give this low. (5)
Yes, but there is no difference. The goal is never reached. The dunes remain the same trickling shifting sands. 23.55
You really know how to cheer a person up! 24.66
Social Sex and The Climbing and Sinking! 21.11
If you left off the last three lines, this would be as good as the first I read in this line.
Smile. Candidly. 21.09
Took me a couple of reads. I'm slow. 24.0
YES!!! I worship the screen your poem appears on! 24.564
I resemble that! Hmmnffpt! 22.226
Smacked the silver masked one up side the head!
21.11111
As he eats it? 17.43
This bores.
Okay. The ending was worth the read. 23.33
Interesting constipation. 18.443
Too big a dash of kindness! 17.666
Where does the line fall between long prose and long poeme???