Nice images. Winter will soothe the insomnia. I love the seasons in your work.

Again, the seasons in your secret garden.

I imagine this series as an oral performance, and though I don't get it all, I appreciate it. The "recent" lineup here is full of weather poems tonight.

This is full of imagery which is great, but it could be much more potent (as poetry)if these were tightened down into short, tight jabs rather than lunging roundhouses (paragraphs). All the corporate references can probably be summed up more effectively. "Black and Latino" implies "dark-skinned". But, I like "RJ...Alma Mater." You must write short (or long) fiction!

I guess we've lost you,Bub. I love nature. I love nature poems. But, I almost fell asleep ...reading THIS>

Why didn't you tell meeee ... Duckstein is laced with opium. Cannot bare to vote..

Cogent, with a knockout ending.

captivating, eloquent, but I too, qualm with the title--neuf.

I like the title very much. But the ellipses must go, imho.

Secrets and puzzles, and games.

A painting.

Great!- must go lie down now.

death season...life returns in March

Hail! Hale! Heyll!

interesting. Editing does not wipe out votes?

Pigs, Natty Light, and RJ. Sweet baby Jesus, I'm having a seizures from all the repressed memories you've unleashed!

Yeah you like the snow now, but you'll soon have had your fill. And we of California will be left with our eternal comfort - deprived of the joy of difference. Maybe after not too long you'll wish you could cart it all out here for all of us to enjoy (until it melts)?

Gonna need help Bill. smile 1, lure 1 , fingers 2, thundering 3, rain 5, at last 8 (intentional golden section? 1,1,2,3,5,8) but that's all I got.

Few things with a more solid aura than weather worn oak and iron.

rest in peace.