The question mark can go more than one way, and that bugs me. Otherwise it's cocca.

No, unless you get me a limo with a jello spa and women that shut up when told to... Oh and mai tais.

You should read this open mic one night in Hiroshima dressed up in a wetsuit with flippers and a bucket of sardines. "The U.S. staying stong That Day" YES! I agree one hundred percent in fact "staying stong" was the last thing my japanese baby said to me that fateful day, bleu... May I call you bleu? Thank you, where was I? Ah yes... Right before my little Jung Kao Pao was toasted along with my arms to a slight off brown sausages in an breeze of atomic radioactive scorching poison. Microwaved, if you will. That's why, my friend, I will give you the 10 you've been yearning for. Though it will make you think it's a big fat Zero? Trust me my friend. It's lying. It's a ten and it knows it.

In what way was "history different forever"? Did the events of September 11th 2001 alter the past? No. Or perhaps you mean that history on September 12th 2001 was different from that on September 10th 2001 because it contained the events of the 11th. But that would have been the case whatever happened. In conclusion, you're an idiot.

Yes, to be gang raped by the clergy is always memoriable.

This is an incredible sonnet, No really. This is better than a glow in the dark wishing turd.

A lovely yarn. Masterful poetry.

I think that you have missed the point somewhat. Poetry is about feelngs and emotions, not logic and computerised codes. Although this poem may be correct in its syntax, it has no real value as a representation of your inner soul.

Having read this poem, I have resolved to stop writing poetry merely for its commercial value, and also to desist in my skag habit.

I suppose you have a right to talk about these terrible events. However, they stir up horrible memories in me that I would rather forget.

Ha ha ha! Okay. Lord, one can dream cream but not scream seamone.

great poem, i like it 10

thats the sign of a good father no doubt, but giving away money to make the life of your family better is not what matters, but it is good to be selfless as a father 10

L6---This is unwelcome here...What is unwelcome? I can't tell if this is self-pity or bragging. The message is very mixed.

Ah. I see. You are metamorphosing.

A shag with a rusty spoon.

An unreadable bubbling puddle of solidifying pigeon shit. You're proud I'm sure.

Grammar check please.

Ghirardelli totally ruined chocolate for me.

Sometimes I wonder how people like you survie in this world without dying of stupidity. 9/11 was sad and everything, but compared to the millions of people in other countries who die of stupid shit like the flu every fucking day, 3,000 people dying is nothing to complain about. Dipshit.