crwncka1
on one by crwncka1
10 Oct 2003, 4:00 PM
yah iam not really much of a writer nothing fancy shamcy just my thoughts
one = all that is
Nicely and humorously done.
Haiku is way beyound me, so I can not comment on form. It does make me feel sadness for both parties with the few words you used.
A good poeme but a sad mark on humanity. The problems in Palestine aren't something to joke about. Still' mayby they have a comparable poem about the Trade Center?
I have heard this all before...endlessly by lots of people. So what if it is lyrical?
Dirt.
Tell me what's in heaven? If you can spare some words about its contents for us in need of such descriptions.
I was working in the lab late one night,
When my eyes beheld an eerie sight,
My monster from his slab began to rise,
And suddenly to my surprise,
He did the mash,
It was the monster mash,
He did the mash,
It was a graveyard smash,
It was the mash,
It caught on in a flash,
It was the mash,
It was the monster mash!
femme de chambre
It is often believed that the fruit of temptation was the apple, but if you read the book of Genesis, however, you will see that it actually was the pear
This poem is nowhere near as excellent as the title would suggest.
Have you ever even read Oliver Twist?
Wow! I would never have guessed that someone would have experienced sex!
An opera of teenage hormonal implamentation. A warm cup of boob juice with a dash of bat pee and a smattering of worm hair. 10!
Like a bent uncut penis doing it's dirty work in my colon.
ha haa ha ah aaa. i'm sorry, but you should write comedy. you're really good.
This isn't poetry. It's barely a warm journal entry.
A case of internal chicken pox and no bus fare.
Self masturbation on an elementary level.