quite good, id say. blessed with 9.

joe, you need to learn of how to use language in a humorous manner- attention grabbing verses that incite chuckles.. now if you made this street scene less "sleepsville", its the kind of thing that gets me thinking: jesus christ- cant i get a drive by shooting in this? an old mans pants leaking shit, a major car crash while these damned morons dance? get what im saying?

This poem requires anal sex.

There, isnt that much more lively?

Dat's berry chute. You can only post three poems a week here and you post this. Holy Christ. I mean, you stole half the thing from rhymezone.com - prolly got the other half from dictionary.com. At least come up with 3 more stanzas and make it a real poem.

well, it rhymes, so ...

I read the parody of this before I read the sourse. I do not mean to be mean, but I very much like the parody better. I get a flavor (not from you, I still have not been here long) that here is a lot of incest going on here at PoemRanker. There's a whole lot of screwing going on. Since you are able to inspire so much flattery. I give you a ten.

I can't tell you how much I like this poem. . .10

He accidentilly swallowed it two years ago on a bet that he was actually a robot. typo in the title, by the way.

hey don't worry KC. i am going through the 0s as well. though most of mine are blue. hehe you should read my poem Blue 0s are cowards. a little hard to read, but funny as hell. at least i think so. -10-

i love the rhymes. very good KC lllooovveee it!! yes i had too much cafine. hehehe = )

For lent this year I will be eating no lint.

Posibly the best thing I've read in a week TODAY! JOE-JOE HAS WON THE ESTEAMED AND MOST ADMONISHABLE GOLDEN QUE-TIP AWARDE. CONGRATULATIONS FEW HAVE DARED TRY. FEW HAVE RECIEVED. CLEAN YOUR EARS WELL JOE-JOE, CLEAN YOUR EARS WELL MY SWEET LITTLE MAN.

SHIT!!!!!!!! This win's the first ever HORUSIAN PARODY AWARD! or the HPA (hispictos pubiescent accrusion) The first ever! That was fucking hilarious. I'm serious I was just smoking a joint and reading this and fucking rocking back and forth with a cackle cracking garulous verve emmiting from-a hole in my face. 10!

What If he breaks into your house one night and bleeds in your funnel but? Then you'll have BRAIDS!

Good job Bratsy, Don't allow some of the pagans here to dissuade you. If you don't want the comment with the vulgar language, you can delete it by clicking the red x in the bottom right. Keep it up! 10

Emotionally telling,You started on the seashore and ended up in bed. I think I would have continued narrating from the precipice, that just seemed to say ao much about your feelings.

Well, I got about halfway through this, but it just doesn't grab me. Emotional needs and all that. We all need a little reciprocation of our emotions, Lily seems no exception.

Damn, how long did it take to submit this? I'll have to try to read it when I have more time.

yes. :)