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some deleted user on some deleted poem 1 Oct 2003, 3:48 PM
Wow...I didn't know that you loved me so... I have recently been falling for Jeremi... Perhaps, the three of us can work something out...
J.B. Manning on some deleted poem 1 Oct 2003, 4:02 PM
Your insidious sentiments never fail to raise the hairs on the back of my balls. For you, this is a compliment.
J.B. Manning on Desire by revy13 1 Oct 2003, 4:04 PM
suffering with inner serenity...lovely line. Not sure about the one before it though.
Shardik on some deleted poem 1 Oct 2003, 4:34 PM
Talk about yawn, fuck, this is a coma.
Joe-joe on some deleted poem 1 Oct 2003, 5:05 PM
Now your talkin Tommy kid! By the way, Tom I was not berating you...just giving you a little advice.... you've obviously taken it..whether your realize it or not. Drunkin liar maybe....retard..I don't think so. Go get em kiddo.
Joe-joe on some deleted poem 1 Oct 2003, 5:17 PM
Yo Darky, Weh you been? I was waitin down on 125 for you the other night. You get my message? Don't be playin me like that homey! I told the other homeboys you'd be uptown. Laquisha was there with yo son Issac. Yo Darky, the bitch was pissed when she herd you hooked up with Tiwana and Tonya the other night. Dem Hoe's let the shit out the bag. You be a dead man if they get they ass on you. Yo, word goin round town that me and you hookin up to pull some shit off. Homeboys up here don't want any part of our shit....hell two the badddest mother-fuckers on the planet hangin..raisin hell. Those fucking gooks on Martin Luther King Blvd. boarden up they windows and shit...Yo man we like batman and robin....we gonna bang some hoe's smoke some crack or what? Don't bitch out on me this time chump!!! Meet me in front of the Appolo at 8 sharp....Don't play me now!
Joe-joe on some deleted poem 1 Oct 2003, 5:30 PM
I am thoroughly convinced that you do not exist in human form..that you are a computer program running in background on this site...Nevertheless, I expect to see your tired old ass at the Apollo later on tonight.
Clearly you are both smelly corks bobbing in a sea of overly warmed baby brie. 10! . ______ ____|PooP|____ / ~ ~\ -=0=-/-=0- / / \ ( (_) ) \ ____ / \ (____) / \ / \@@@@/ \WW/ YY
INTRANSIT on Afraid by Brittanyy 1 Oct 2003, 6:52 PM
What happened to Gwen? If I may ask.
Brittanyy on Afraid by Brittanyy 1 Oct 2003, 6:54 PM
She died of Diabetes
INTRANSIT on whimsicals by nentwined 1 Oct 2003, 6:58 PM
whip-crackin' good.
Brittanyy on Afraid by Brittanyy 1 Oct 2003, 6:58 PM
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some deleted user on I am Jack's Black magic, dude. by Shardik 1 Oct 2003, 7:08 PM
Is there a reason that you feel the need to torment other members? I do not even know you. I can see why she is an ex! Oh I know...you must have a worm.( Did someone upstairs sell you SHORT? I must be the early bird now! "Lucky me..." :Yawns:
some deleted user on some deleted poem 1 Oct 2003, 7:10 PM
Maybe if you had the right tools you'd be awake right now with a REAL woman and not just reading my poetry with your blow up doll eh?
some deleted user on Killing Ben Afleck by Shardik 1 Oct 2003, 7:29 PM
Feeling aggressive are we?
some deleted user on Timber! by Shardik 1 Oct 2003, 7:31 PM
Hmmmm...you write about poo often?
some deleted user on Pitchforking geraniums for Mrs. Stein by Shardik 1 Oct 2003, 7:32 PM
Nice rhyme.
some deleted user on A good book by Shardik 1 Oct 2003, 7:33 PM
You should use "and" instead of &...it works better.
some deleted user on Under a better bed wetter by Shardik 1 Oct 2003, 7:34 PM
Maybe some structure? Standing on my bed staring at the coffee can Pondering when all of this bed wetting began People at my church may say that I’m getting lazy They still haven’t seen the other side of my mattress "I’ve never been able to let myself get better" Cause I always seem to be under a better bed wetter And it’s j ust gonna stay that way forever because he purchased the top bunk
some deleted user on The United Face of Totally Grody by Shardik 1 Oct 2003, 7:35 PM
???? Er..ok.