pointy. are you suggesting that the only way home is by going down? is home hell?

I had just begun to chew on my marmalaided toasties when I stumbled upon this... Breakfast has never tasted this good.

Stop writing about dark angels trite love life noeone gives a shit

Shawking!

cowboys are nifty.

A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for. Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.

don't quite get the picture. a vase? maybe if you want it to be a pin you should have all the words be vertical like: P R I C K !

A Concrete poem is a conglomeration of words (sometimes one word repeated over and over) whose overall shape is a key to the concept it presents. There are no truly agreed-upon conventions, but a natural elegance of arrangement is often striven for. Sometimes the poem can be read in multiple directions from different starting points, depending on the shape of the form and the curiousity of the reader.

That's why I (from cow on) will be opting for the infamous 1-0-1.

ha ha ha ha...WHO? lol.

A carefully stacked pile of shucked shit. Amazingly painful and absurdly meaningless. Because, we were convinced that if anyone could escape death that 'anyone' would've been you?

Fuck it apparently, i'm not elligable to blow you up, so just fucking go explode on your own. ARGH! blach!

I must admit...I am basking in your obsession... ;)

You are always amazing, friend...

It's amazing what me you and Da come up with in our free time. Last night I found some lint in my neighbors Timothy Hutton (navelator)

What? Ha ha ha. What? Talk about stringing some words together in an interesting way? But this isn't poetry it's Alphabet poop.

[_] AABB rhyming scheme [_] About drugs [_] About romantic love [_] About writing [_] About suicide or self-mutilation [X_] About the author's social pastimes [X_] Arbitrary indentation [X_] Arbitrary line breaks [_] Autobiographical but written in the third person [X_] Clerical errors [_] Clichéd imagery (gazing out of window, tears falling like rain) [_] Clichéd rhymes (love/above, heart/apart) [_] Clichéd angst words (putrid, wretched) [X_] Devoid of rhyme [_] Devoid of other linguistic embellishments (alliteration, onomatopoeia) [_] Devoid of other literary devices (simile, synaesthesia) [_] Devoid of wondrous or fantastical imagery [X_] Ellipses used overabundantly [X] Insipidly whimsical or zany [_] Internet shorthand or emoticons [_] Leaving rant [X_] Lower case only [_] 'Lyrics' [X_] Melodramatic [_] Naively religious or superstitious [_] Obsessed with femininity [X_] Pointedly unanswered questions [_] Rage against the machine [_] Repetition of a word or phrase to the point of nausea [_X] Sanctimonious [_] Self-obsessed [_] Sentimental [_] Smugly-named protagonist [XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX to infinity] Thesaurophilia [_] Untitled [_] Vicarious wish fulfilment SP

Sir Manning's new verse is fantastic, It's lyrical, raw and scholastic, I just think it's swell, But in case you can't tell I'm actually being sarcastic.

These are like some sort of pseudo-limericks. 10

::Yawns::