Loved the last 2 lines.

ouchies.

A bit empty for me. Try something close to home, excite me.1

beating you in a miniskirt?

Beautiful. I have no complaints, and the poem seemed consistently good, no whimpy stanzas.

What a sweet poem, I can tell you put a lot of feeling into it, thanks for sharing

I vote on everything, but you have to do something of higher quality than this (or something more repulsive) to get a comment every time!

not bad. a couple stumbles, but enjoyable. [[I'm am but a slut?]]

richa!! give me verb, oh please, oh please: "And if he should swap his stars with words, his eyes for a mouth as pale as a painted stage-prop lantern."

You may be the darkest angel. I claim no such distinction. I am, however, the -=Darkest_ Angel=-.

hypothulated? overall, cute, though I'm not into the "look, vision, vision sucks" thing. is this a response to ... (what was it called... "i am blind" or some such?)

Your nature/interpersonal relations poems are always a joy to read, especially when they remind me that winter will be here soon.

A bit empty for me. Try something close to home, excite me.1

A bit empty for me. Try something close to home, excite me.1

pixie powder

pixie powder

pixie powder

For me it needed some old people being run down by a truck.

Your either/or is quite amusing. I'm a both/and kind of person.

beautiful, and it flows so easily