| Re: Kennedy the cunt by mr cunt |
some deleted user 85.210.216.223 |
11-Mar-07/11:33 AM |
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Great poem. All the Kennedys are cunts. Sorry were.
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| Re: Ben Fogle by Stephen Robins |
Ranger 81.103.124.179 |
11-Mar-07/2:34 PM |
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I do hope you've been watching Crufts. He was particularly splendidly attired today.
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| Re: i feel so cold by minty871 |
Candlewhacks 69.228.43.231 |
11-Mar-07/6:02 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Dr Fartspittle 85.210.247.35 |
11-Mar-07/6:05 PM |
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| Re: On The Gay Beach by Edna Sweetlove |
Dr Fartspittle 85.210.247.35 |
11-Mar-07/6:06 PM |
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I know the place! It stinks of stale spunk.
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| Re: Two Cunts by mr cunt |
Dr Fartspittle 85.210.247.35 |
11-Mar-07/6:13 PM |
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| Re: More and more Shuushin by mr cunt |
Dr Fartspittle 85.210.247.35 |
11-Mar-07/6:13 PM |
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They seem like a load of turds. Maybe the famous critic Mr Turd will appear and let us know.
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| Re: Two More Cunts Who Are One Cunt by mr cunt |
Dr Fartspittle 85.210.247.35 |
11-Mar-07/6:18 PM |
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Yes they stunk. They have gone now but can be found on Poetryshared and Allpoetry for those who wish to go and laugh. There the name is combined to "Colin Douglas" but it's the sam old crap.
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| Re: Nightshades by Bachus |
Dr Fartspittle 85.210.247.35 |
11-Mar-07/6:21 PM |
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Learn to spell your own fuckin' name, dickhead.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
Dr Fartspittle 85.210.247.35 |
11-Mar-07/6:22 PM |
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What the fuck? Here's my revised version...
City park sun-browned
Sprinkler system broken down
How about a shag?
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| Re: Mask by sk8boardandpoems |
some deleted user 85.210.238.102 |
12-Mar-07/11:48 AM |
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| Re: Ode to necrophilia by Bobjim |
some deleted user 85.210.238.102 |
12-Mar-07/11:49 AM |
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boring.old hat.make way for the new shit bu SHUUSIT!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
some deleted user 85.210.238.102 |
12-Mar-07/11:50 AM |
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| Re: A Fart For All Mankind by Edna Sweetlove |
some deleted user 85.210.238.102 |
12-Mar-07/11:52 AM |
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Excellent.Better than Rockmage and Shuushit.
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| Re: All Hail! All Hail! America The Golden! by Edna Sweetlove |
some deleted user 85.210.238.102 |
12-Mar-07/11:53 AM |
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Too liberal for me.You must be a commie.
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| Re: The Landscape by Sasha |
Dovina 75.82.86.162 |
12-Mar-07/6:09 PM |
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This place has become overrun with vermin while you were away. Not much to do here anymore, unless you want to discuss feces and the like. I always like your poems, and Desnos must be ok too, but how would I know? Best of luck wherever you post.
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| Re: Within by drnick |
Dovina 75.82.86.162 |
12-Mar-07/6:10 PM |
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Hey, please don't join them; you can do better.
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| Re: i feel so cold by minty871 |
Dovina 75.82.86.162 |
12-Mar-07/6:15 PM |
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If you want to use street language, ok, but it's a bit off-putting as it comes only late in the poem. I bet this is a good song; like to hear it.
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| Re: Just today by MacFrantic |
Dovina 75.82.86.162 |
12-Mar-07/6:18 PM |
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| Re: A New Deal (Rewrite) by oneglove |
Dovina 75.82.86.162 |
12-Mar-07/6:22 PM |
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Too much explaining and generalizing, where just showing the scene and the man's feelings would work better. With a well-worn topic like this, something unique is needed. I do like the Chorus.
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