Re: Edna's Video Library by Edna Sweetlove	mr cunt 85.210.200.143	8-Mar-07/11:10 AM
Don't be put off by that cunt Shuushin. He's just a cunt.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dental Panic 84.85.206.227	8-Mar-07/5:52 PM
To boldly go where no one’s gone before, said the man, sticking his head inside the camel’s ass. Bad case of history repeating. Had a friend of mine read this. He served as a commando in Afghanistan and Iraq. It made him yawn. He doesn’t give a shit about poetry. When you're wounded and left on Afghanistan's plains, And the women come out to cut up what remains, Jest roll to your rifle and blow out your brains An' go to your Gawd like a soldier. Go, go, go like a soldier, Go, go, go like a soldier, Go, go, go like a soldier, So-oldier _of_ the Queen! -- Rudyard Kipling
Re: Hurt by Bethy	Dovina 75.82.86.162	9-Mar-07/1:18 PM
The first thing that comes to mind, besides liking this, is that the "faint signs of cracking" in your painted smile are something he might notice, but you might not. I'd put it third person, i.e. As he turned and walked away, the painted smile upon her face, . . .
Re: A Rendezvous by lrustagi	Bethy 165.154.46.54	9-Mar-07/1:18 PM
I like this !! Don't change a word... :) Bethy
regarding some deleted poem...	jessicazee 65.30.187.185	10-Mar-07/3:10 AM
stop capitalizing, way better! 9
Re: Reincarnation by Dovina	jessicazee 65.30.187.185	10-Mar-07/3:13 AM
I love "tiniest bugs", then it looks like long division, until "Nero", then a sudoku (sp?) puzzle, then the best line I've seen lately: "in poet, leaf, or dog__", yay and yay. 9
Re: Hallelujah by hungry_shepherd	Ranger 81.103.124.179	10-Mar-07/9:31 AM
You must know, surely, that any appreciator of Cohen (or, more likely, Buckley) will not be able to bring themself to accept this.
Re: Hallelujah by hungry_shepherd	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 63.212.164.106	10-Mar-07/11:11 AM
An emergency spaz that doubles as a handyman's tortoise auditorium.
Re: A Lament For Alice by hungry_shepherd	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 63.212.164.106	10-Mar-07/11:12 AM
An extremely Dutch blouse egg.
Re: all alone by Phalkon	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 63.212.164.106	10-Mar-07/11:15 AM
A leather egg which opens up to reveal an exploding nappy-enriched toilet helmet.
Re: Settling In by jessicazee	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 63.212.164.106	10-Mar-07/11:17 AM
An unspeakably disappointing spoon coated in vicar discharge.
Re: A whole load of cunts by mr cunt	richa 81.179.219.225	10-Mar-07/11:19 AM
Are you and Edna Pete Burns.
Re: Hurt by Bethy	Dr Peter Douglas 80.225.220.178	10-Mar-07/2:35 PM
Hello Bethy Thankyou for being kind about my poetry. Sadly thanks to the likes of steve robbins,edna sweetlove, mrc***t and a few others i am leaving the site, i expect comments on my poems not very personal attacks. I will be moving to another site and i will email you with that site not via this public use. Very best wishes to you Peter.
Re: Two More Cunts Who Are One Cunt by mr cunt	mr cunt 85.210.206.238	11-Mar-07/10:55 AM
And the funniest thing of all is that these cunts have now had a hissifit and buggered off! Weeds. No bollocks.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dan garcia-Black 67.150.174.51	11-Mar-07/11:03 AM
Hai-verse? Free-ku?
Re: i feel so cold by minty871	Dan garcia-Black 67.150.174.51	11-Mar-07/11:07 AM
You might want to make a left on Valentine's day and find some body to keep you warm.
Re: More and more Shuushin by mr cunt	Dan garcia-Black 67.150.174.51	11-Mar-07/11:14 AM
I agree hole(as in cunt)-heartedly. Youse a dynamic IP. I get shocks from thos statics. PS- Try nihsuuhS and comment sdrawkcab.
Re: A Fart For All Mankind by Edna Sweetlove	mr cunt 85.210.206.238	11-Mar-07/11:14 AM
Better than Shitshin
Re: More and more Shuushin by mr cunt	some deleted user 85.210.216.223	11-Mar-07/11:31 AM
You spotted me, I confess I am a cunt.
Re: A whole load of cunts by mr cunt	some deleted user 85.210.216.223	11-Mar-07/11:32 AM
Totally spot on.