But I'm still put off by the use of the N-word. Don't like it.

Sounded good to me. I hate that fucking nigger. And I fucking hate escalades and basketball.

-nods- blessed with 7.

hrmm.. childish.. makes me wonder: didnt your remember that the sun exists, and that its hot? do you remember that chocolate tends to melt when heated?.. slightly funny though.. ill give you that. 5.

... settle.. youve burned out.

Val, I give you a 10 because I see the humor and the wit of this poem! Margaret

journal entry. 6.

After the way you have treated me, I hate to say this but this is an excellent poem. I can be objective, can you?

short, sweet.. but im left hanging.. why? tip: if your going to do miniatures.. make sure you dont leave any holes in the paper when you turn it in. 5

and you dare to belittle my poems? crawl back into your fucking hole you worthless fraud. 0

First, I don't even think this qualifies as Haiku. Second, you are a misogynist. This is a real -0-

I give the first half a ten, the second half a 7. That averages out to 8.5, and I'll round it up to 9.

get a plane ticket? ;/ 7.

no.. this doesnt do it.. i didnt think my I'm Back poem could be made worse or done in a crappier fashion.. but you convinced me.. really.. what the hell was the purpose in making this poem? 0

"Soother her needless anxieties and sonstant affronts." i believe there is a typo in here or two.

.. if your goal was to capture the mental workings of children, then ok, im not going to step on this.. because you did it well.. the cute innocence and crap.. but cmon, couldnt you insert a "goddamn it" or "shit".. ok, ok, im being picky.. -sigh- 6

title sucks.. death is a dead subject, it takes a master to give it life, your not fit for the job.. 0

sounds like a toss.

um.. ok, maybe im lacking the mental fuel, but could you explain.. because.. i dont get it.. but nice ascii work.

Crotchless floss gumming.