horus8
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2003, 4:21 PM
Murder! Yes! 10!
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2003, 3:07 PM
Beautiful prayer...
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2003, 3:09 PM
Oh, my gosh! You are fabulous! Do you have music for all of your stuff, as well?
S3 + last line thank you for that -inspiring
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2003, 2:58 PM
Effective use of repitition.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2003, 3:02 PM
Let us not perpetuate the idea of a lost cause...
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2003, 3:07 PM
Sad, sad, sad...you have endured a lot of loss, huh?
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2003, 3:10 PM
Extremely intense...quite effective!
isn't the road the oldest lonely writers standard?
this poem is a slipknot, i think. just when it seems that nothings working out somebody yanks the ends and everything smooths out.
yes quite. My motto has always been that we're all Christians - only SOME of us choose not to be...
I just pray that those without Christ can find as much meaning in their lives as I have in mine. Because without Jesus life becomes meaningless. Our wealths, our values, our lusts, our desires, our hopes, our fears, our dreams, our realities, our fictions, our actions and our reactions serve no purpose...
even our mottoes become meaningless.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2003, 2:55 PM
I am impressed with how well you handle this rhyme pattern. I think that it is quite effective.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2003, 3:11 PM
Why punish yourself?
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2003, 2:49 PM
I love this!
Love it!
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2003, 2:58 PM
I like it...I think that this is well done!
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2003, 3:01 PM
I like the ambiguity.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2003, 3:06 PM
Cute...
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2003, 3:00 PM
I love the way you are able to weave religion/spirituality into your works.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2003, 5:40 PM
that is very nice and gentle, maybe like what a lady has under her mossy dress, but why did you say meanies to mine?
Ha ha ha i saw it. Pointing!