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on Para Metres by Blue Magpie
17 Aug 2003, 6:40 PM
Twist on concrete, cool.
you kill me.
I'm a flag day Juner, not a May cuspidor.
reminds me of some of P&K's early work.
I have TATU's agent on the horn.
I'm a Gemini, thankyouverymuch. I expect the rain to have the quality of mercy. Wet, slobbery kisses all over me. No cold showers, please!
needs a slight revision, but this one Rolls, baby, rolls.
Read aloud, it hops on pop.
I like the randomly shifted lines better. Dropping the buttercup works! I don't know what perfect is, but I can't imagine it being better than this. you piss me off.
Johnny's got a new gun, and baby it's murder.
Fresh, exciting.
I can stick my tongue up my nose.
I'll come back. First read looks pretty good.
Do you feel safe?
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I do.
Jerimi sounds like a great last date. Too bad I'm gender conscious. If I were not I'm sure I would be unconscious the morning after and this scientific method of thinking would be validated by my corpse. Does Jerimi work for the CIA, or worse, is he a law professor? Great thought process good follow through. 9(at least).
Felching can be steady work Ive heard.
Lupus on my car thumb. Lupus on my heel. Lupus on my cigarrette when my piggy's squeal.
You always make me giggle.
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on Erotic Crossroad in my Dream: So I Cream Into Me Panties by Luzr
17 Aug 2003, 6:34 PM
great shape, but a couple typos.
Talent, pure and simple.