Bachus
on Strength by Freethinker1602
26 Jul 2003, 5:11 PM
"When your life seems to crunble down around you" It's like you reached in and took the words right out of my mouth? Amazing. Bravo.
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You say farmer. most of what is farmed is green monochromatic.....oh I don't know what the hell i'm talking about. nevermind.
mmmm. Indeed.
Who's this?
And here we clearly see the benifits of raising your child in a good catholic school early on.
I'm confused... but you made me laugh so all the better. Skipped from one thing to another.. but if you were trying to make the reader laugh and be confused you've managed... nice job.
Seems a hateful subject... I'm going to take a guess that perhaps its somewhat about the war? With the America remarks thats what I get from it... kinda telling everyone to mind their own business stick it up their ass and let all thats well go on if they can't then may the same bad luck come to them that came to the states. Metaphore is a great thing... as is poetry... each reader can come to their own ideals.
Keep up the writing and good luck with it all.
Holding a persons heart in your hand, caring only about them? Don't care about yourself because your obsession lies within and upon them? The feel of their skin makes your hands burn sensually?
Short and sweet... nothing wrong with that. Thought I'd let you know what I got from your poem... see if I was right in how I read into it. If not I'd like to know what it was that you were thinking with your words.
nice poem... makes a person think... thats what writing is all about.
Keep on writing because those of us the feeling and those of us that refuse to feel are the ones that have created language.
Made me smile... didn't really reread to find meaning behind it... but it made me smile... half way through I thought to myself "I can relate."
Keep on writing...
like it or not, it likes to be not. because it's not like it's not or, it depends on what your definition of the word "is " is. wtf? lol!!!!!
Go to the bookstore. Buy a copy of "Poetry for dummies". Rub it against your genitalia. It's cheaper than a hooker, and feels better. Trust me. I drive a truck. LOL.!
A prostitute with a wooden clitoris, and ah... on ahhh, oh! on GHP, right? I'm getting closer though? Right? I think so, this is fun, it's better than that movie the Cell. And that's all that matters. It's like a scavenger hunt with that guy from slingblade "Not funny gay ha ha, funny queer, hmm ha.".
Yes, as Bachus would say "Nice fucking socks" Now, off to throw tissue, good day.
im nothing to you...
just a blurr in the back of your mind
lost ...not to be found
"Escape is an Unafordable luxury" And apparently literacy.
wtf... lol! blessed with 8.