Amazing, it's like a maze through down syndrome.

heh...even better rewrite there...now you can write an ode or something about his lonely bitter and cynical world...where all is lost and his poor first mate has gone blind, insane and deaf...lol...now that would be inspiring

The curse of the meacock.

Once I spelled "tounge" 'catfish'. It was very impressive and 'metaphorical'. I was rebelling.

Death by popcorn.

I liked this poem as well

Awe.. Look at me. I'm so cute, between bars.

An opera for the bolemic.

You need to shut up and suck my Rodzilla.

Wow. How long ago did you write this? Very well written. -10-

Story of my younger years, but smirnoff ice? Good Christ, I've heard of some desperate shit, but this takes the cake. There's a typo in the latter half, by the way. It was nonetheless quite amusing.

This is hot shit!

what is kakistocracy

Any "sence"? Have you given any thought to what you might do with yourself once you begin living.

Maybe I'm buried in the time capsule of stupidity and your the ruibber band holding my nuts to your front teeth.

thrust and glide, the pens power i ride a rainbow of color words the power of the gods, driving red hot rods fast lane diver currents dance against you the divider still stands with graffiti marks the illusion of transformation alas, good fencing. ;) 8

I like the dream segue. I wish that I could bring the little guy back. Why didn't you get money for the skins? Spell 'break' brake. A touching piece that gets a niner.

Oh lord, I better put my galoshes on, it's getting deep in here.

And to think my sherbert melted a bit to read this nonsense.

My friend, you be-ake a fine turdloaf. You are the worst poet alive by far. This poem is a gag.