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on Departing Suburbia by Caducus
25 Jul 2003, 12:21 PM
Seven lines up from the bottom is missing a word "be".
Hilarious, just the thought of you in spandex with a mullett, Gof I miss Paul Michael Glasier and Huggie.
Tell me do you live near these dudes ?
You crease me up
haha i love
"and dashed
home to dance naked and kareoke while preparing
my traditional Korean dinner,"
fucking koreans and their kareoke
"Simplistic words" doesn't sound great
I think Simple might work better.
LoL "Like a dead man swinging to and fro from a rope" kinda gave me the image of a hung convict swinging back and forth like a swing.
But it fits into the death thing after it...
"even if you don't pray your prayer"
why not take out prayer
Dammit Woman
Stop following the man!
jk
continue
Thanks DurtKL for the comment. I think i will change it to Simple. By the way i wrote that poem around 3am in the morning. lol
He-pan (Free cookware) by ahighgurl
Master's of the Tuniverse
Follow He-pan,
He knows the way,
Hes got your eggs.
It's He-panned out,
Day by day.
You may not like em,
There's no yolk.
It's right for toast,
Or rump roast.
Follow He-pan,
He snaps the training bra,
He'll get you boobs up,
Even if you don't nipple mouth
Your prayer.
Don't shed a tupperware,
He's air.
Ready to take your pussy hair.
An floss
He is the He-pan,
Follow him,
He has the secret knock
to get to Skilletor.
I knew from the get go, but who gives a fuck about vipersna or dark angel really? lol.
Anyone smell shit? Because, I'm smelling the distinct odor of a shitaco with a shavocado coming on.
Maybe you're the girl that likes cum
Maybe you're the girl who i beat like a drum
Maybe you're the girl stung out on coke
Maybe you're the girl my daddy likes to poke
Maybe you're the girl who loves to rhyme
Maybe you're the girl who fucked a lime
where did it go away to?
where was it in the first place?
what is orange vanilla sky?
thank you
I'm gonna have to agree with you on that on Durt. Smirnoff is much better than all those other fuckers. -10-.
I know exactly how you feel. I was worried about exploring your poem too thoroughly when I found it lying here. An unhappy and overly visible grave for a poem like this.
You lied to your dentist!?
If you can't trust your friendly caring and sensitive dentist, who can you trust? Certainly not us!
I dated a girl named Azure once, she was splendid.
I'm not one to preach, but I assure you this is a third too long. A great story, a touch fat.
Aint that the truth.
Dark Dude its only hair ! do not despair
AwEsOmE