regarding some deleted poem...	amanda_dcosta 61.17.21.37	8-Feb-07/3:15 AM
Hi rockmage. I've seen your votes on my pages and thought you didn't seem to like my stuff. A zero on every poem. Am disappointed, but thanks for the attention.
Re: Flowers by Dovina	ALChemy 71.68.46.177	8-Feb-07/5:31 AM
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Re: She dreams by amanda_dcosta	ALChemy 71.68.46.177	8-Feb-07/5:57 AM
One of the best poems I've read here. He's a very lucky man.
Re: You by amanda_dcosta	ALChemy 71.68.46.177	8-Feb-07/6:06 AM
Some of the best half rhyme I've read here.
regarding some deleted poem...	Ranger 81.103.124.179	8-Feb-07/8:27 AM
This is a joke piece, isn't it?
Re: a days journey by donmiguel1960	Ranger 81.103.124.179	8-Feb-07/8:31 AM
What do you mean when you say 'today I've awoken week in spirit'? Is it a typo, or are you making a profound temporal and spiritual claim?
regarding some deleted poem...	Ranger 81.103.124.179	8-Feb-07/8:33 AM
I was sure this was going to be a 'My Sharona' parody; now I feel shortchanged...
regarding some deleted poem...	Ranger 81.103.124.179	8-Feb-07/8:42 AM
Good lord, what is this? Confessional was last week at the -=All_Saints=- chapel, where they dished out shreds of prose to reformed KFC addicts. But seriously, this should probably be re-arranged into prose; your tendency seems to be one of storytelling. I liked it, and didn't know whether to laugh, cry or strap on a bulletproof vest - but I'd prefer it in a more accessible mode.
Re: Sunday night is Curry night by ==Doylum	Ranger 81.103.124.179	8-Feb-07/8:49 AM
Genius
Re: Married by INTRANSIT	Ranger 81.103.124.179	8-Feb-07/8:50 AM
Superb
Re: Stone Tablets by fevriere	Ranger 81.103.124.179	8-Feb-07/9:38 AM
Brilliant, every teenager should read this.
Re: A Part of Me by Quarton	Quarton 12.206.225.32	8-Feb-07/1:07 PM
Ranger, you are probably right but the whole Cartesian mind-set seems to be fair game though rather abstract which makes for a difficult subject to write about. Thanks for the read and comments.
Re: AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Dr Peter Douglas 80.225.168.241	8-Feb-07/2:45 PM
Wow Dark so many and excellent! A meagre ten does not do justice but i offer it anyway.
Re: Bitter by Ranger	Dr Peter Douglas 80.225.168.241	8-Feb-07/2:52 PM
A very sad and deep poem Ranger. Ghosts have a habit of haunting you for years and then suddenly fading away back to eternity just when you need them most. Here in the Jungle the tribes pay homage to their ghosts all the time and have places to honour them. Some people may say thats weird but its strangely compelling and helps them and me to talk to people who have gone.
Re: She dreams by amanda_dcosta	Dr Peter Douglas 80.225.168.241	8-Feb-07/2:55 PM
a beautiful dreamy love poem amanda, full of sunshine and love and blue skies and rainbow colours of joy and love. Excellent.
Re: Cupid Missed Two Junkies (slightly clearer, rambling draft) by Ranger	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	8-Feb-07/3:54 PM
This needs a bit of consideration, and more defined shaping of the scene. While the title presupposes the theme, it as it stands now is a little confusing to me; basically, I'm wondering if you have a pretty good image & mental snapshot of the of this man, posed in that odd bodily articulation assumed just before & during the coveted arrival of deathly-bliss; the opiate rushing of the soul towards oblivion... Or if he just discovered that it was laced with acid and had a sporadic thought, or image, of enhancing the coming madness with the consumtion of an bloody orange. In short, I'd be happy to see this piece recieve some sharper definition. The image and thought this poem grasps for is worth perfecting. Till then, mate, heres a seven.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 67.172.190.253	8-Feb-07/4:12 PM
Does not even make it to the lowest form of greeting card.
regarding some deleted poem...	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.216.174	8-Feb-07/7:14 PM
Too many capital letters. You must be a cunt.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 75.82.86.162	8-Feb-07/7:17 PM
Try applying here: http://poemranker.com/suggestion-browse.jsp?id=149569
Re: A Cautionary Tale by Tman	Dovina 75.82.86.162	8-Feb-07/7:23 PM
What is the "either of sleep"?