<{Baba^Yaga}>
on 1 by Crakyamuni
15 Jul 2003, 7:07 PM
Amen
Ha! Ha! You got wanked, you got wanked. Urp.
OH, "wInd"! Not "wind". Now it makes sense!
You don't have enough talent to piss me off, but I have enough popcorn to watch you try. Asl?
Say what I mean? Here, let me slow it down for you.
1. You're not funny
2. You are horribly ugly & fat & pock marked
3. I believe you can't be trusted
4. Because you're a nigger jew
5. Drugs or not I think I'm speaking quite clearly
6. Here, watch this
7. Your writing is weak and boring and I can't get into it because, I believe people that have ass fetishes and like fucking kids and animals because thay feel guilty about their parent's money or their 'no one understand's my genius groping' to be boring and only sub moderately amusing on 'b' list holidays.
8. In a nutshell, I would appreciate your attempts at belittling me in the future, or the ones from our past even, if they were more intelligent and less self absorbed.
9. Thank you, shut the door on the way out please Stephanie.
A dandy.
last line hits, going back to the city only strengthens the preceding pagan imges 8
One thing : forest / forrest
So So
This is a waayy cool opening but its title lets itself down only due to our sperm perm sock shoving crotch fake timberlake. But its late here midnight, midweek and my brain juices are flaking but i have to say H8 this is the best I have read of yours, I have no MP3
fuck ! 10
And any cu** blue voting this below 5 i'm about to unbutton my zip so get ready to munch on my blower constrictor.
Lose the title how about:
Killing crows.
also last line possibility:
This rivers gone dirty when you turned it to wine,
At least you cant hurt me, if your no longer mine,#
She cried me a river of crocodile tears,
And I drown in the torrent of yesteryears.
"forsaken 63.88.160.101" 'nough said. Sad, really sad.
I like how the layout looks like a lightningbolt\excamation point. Must...re-..read...
It's so slim that I feel guilty suggesting that you slim it down. But "...the skirt of a scrap yard ballerina named xena..." is just more flashy. Punch me if economy is wrong for this, but it seems that you're half way there already. "Naive pixies/ beware" is awesome. "Innocent..." is redundant, I think.
An 8 on great images alone. But it could be better yet.
P.S. Thanx for your comments on my stuff. I appreciate the honesty about Sorry Romance.
Quite the looking glass.
Don't do it man! LOL.
I loved the first three quarters of it.
Pure but the title reminds me of Draculas insect eating slave.
How was Afrique?