Children are such inspirations for writing. This reminds me of Rita Dove's poem about nursing her daughter. What a gift for your child when she's (?) old enough to appreciate it.

Yes!

It tickled my poetic thought process. ;] blessed with 8.

ah, yes, beautifull.. flows to my soul.. 10. ;)

A beautifully written piece of work.

Okay...A little angry at your mother or something? Nice use of rhythm! 7.

This is an excellent flowing piece, wonderfully descriptive and vivid. Well worth at least a 9.

Sad, and a little scary. I like how raw it is, though! 8 ~cls~

Nice Haiku.

It's raining in Baltimore, so I'll dance in the rain if you'll watch the sun rise. Watch out for pupil scarring. This would make a good song.

lol.

One of the best poems I've read, today. 10! Funny & dramtic and that's not always easy to do. Welcome to poemranker, now I must go pray to penis for rent, Adieu.

hrmm.. this poems spark doesn't manage to ignite my fuel, but its well written. Blessed with 7.

Very mellow read, i enjoyed it alot. blessed with nine.

better than the rest, still doesnt have much variety concerning expression or imaginative detail. Blessed with eight.

I thought it was spelled dammit. You learn something new every day. Nice refrain there in the middle.

Sounds like an affair poem to me. For once, just (don't) break wind.

not colourfull really.. written with a tired theme and helped me to fall asleep two times in the middle of reading it.. 5.

jagged one-word-at-a-time code that reads like the speech of someone who stutters badly.. blessed with 6.

Hrmm.. I wasn't aware that we had 12 year olds posting stuff here.... blessed with a three.