lol.

I liked it.

I think pissing you off was his point. He lives for it. Good Vilanelle by the way. -9-

Mediocre. As usual.

Muahahaha. Funny little story, i liked it alot. ;P 10.

I like this poem slightly less than I like being forced to eat my own shit by my psychotic cell-mate

I take it English isn't your first language?

Touching, but lacks enough expression of rage and anger to go with all the broken things. -8- P.S. Frasor Allonby, your former cellmate says next time you say he forced you to eat your own shit, He'll make you eat his as well.

A jubille of meows.

Weaker than thee other.

Why so grumpy? Did she laugh at your flimsy cock? Or was it when you came before she even finishsed getting undressed. There, there, you poor little serial killer, don't cry, let your mommy make it all better. What's that you say? It was mommy who use to suck on your boyish wanker every night after everyone else had fallen asleep? is that your dirty little secret? Or was it dear old Dad dressed in moms pumps and Jones of NewYork slip dress? Oh that terrible bourbon breath, and the lipstick all smudged on his five o'clock shadow when he came up for air.

Um.. cmon man, if your going to attack me, atleast be creative about it, i mean fucking a.. this is sad man, i dont even need to defend myself, i just have to let you do the work for me with this shit. And whats the obsession you have with anal sex, aids, homosexuality and fucking my ear? Its not even remotely humorouse, I can't even laugh at it since its so poorly carried out.. here, have a zero. I usually like to be able to give my attackers better scores than this, but you disappoint me.

Buddist can be such silly silly beings. I really think that this could be applied to any incident involving opression or terrorism. -8-

Anything. but mediocre. It's ah... Bland.

TIMMY!ah ti ti ti timmMY!TIMAHY!

Please get out of my window display. If you think I'm too fucking gay. lol

Peee-you. Your poem not only stinks, but your obvious longing and frustration reeks of the icky sweet vapors of 14 teen year old mal-adjusted girls buried in the basement. Your a pre-mature ejaculator aren't you? Be honest.

It was much better before you changed the spellings.

Chilling.

Also, quite amusing.