Very potically incorrect.

damn.. that has to be painful. 8.

Now this makes up for the other two.

Actually, I like it. :)

For God sake this is a terrible thing to write about a person.

Heres the basic DMTR That I Came Up With: OneFingerAnswer Dissected: One 1: being a single unit or thing <one day at a time> 2a: being one in particular <early one morning> b: being preeminently what is indicated <one fine person> -- Finger 1: any of the five terminating members of the hand: a digit of the forelimb; especially: one other than the thumb 2c: a projecting piece (as a pawl for a ratchet) brought into contact with an object to affect its motion 4: INTEREST, SHEAR -- often used in the phrase have a finger in the pie 5: BIRD 10 -- usually used with the -- Answer 2: a reply to a legal charge or suit: PLEA; also: DEFENSE (these two words dont need dissection) 3: something done in response or reaction 5: one that imitates, matches, or corresponds to another -- Secondary Dissections: interest 3 : ADVANTAGE, BENEFIT; also : SELF-INTEREST 5 a : a feeling that accompanies or causes special attention to an object or class of objects: CONCERN (Dissection not required) -- shear 1 : to cut through something with or as if with a sharp instrument -- bird 7 (chiefly British) [a]: a hissing or jeering expressive of disapproval -- Final Dissections: advantage 1: superiority of position or condition -- self-interest 1: a concern for one's own advantage and well-being [Benefit i felt wasnt needed in the dissection.]

That's fun. If you don't mind I'd like to see you play with this and see what comes for my name.

Good lord, I fell asleep and filled my belly button full of slobber, what were you saying I fell asleep between a "dafodil" and "clinging" I believe.

That's not a pimple, sir, this is "I leaf the son to accomp'nie her on days Ate night, I leave the moon too light up her weigh I do butt go by chance Seeking charm in Moment's dense Too let Grease continue her play-doo-doo ... and leaf me, against her balsalm"

That was too cool.

You have come a long way my friend, and you have earned every moment. GOLDEN QUE TIP awarde, for having more heart than a rapscallion poet deserves. I like how you only put in the commas and allowed your capitalization to accentuate starts and stops, a fine piece, very handsome.

I wanted too let you know, that I didn't think your poetry was totally hopeless earlier, (it is frightfully young and sensitive) but I would be willing to teach you, some will warn you not to trust me (because they will be jealous),and because I am Grendal, I am offering you this opportunity because I went and read a bit about you on your home page and we have some of the same interests. I also would rather see you have a passion for writing and living rather than feeling resentful of who you are or how you percieve the world around you. I found that you were interesting and would be willing to have you as my apprentice.

This is a terrible thing to write about someone, I found some of the writings to be quite nice. I also thought that museheart poems to be very good. So why do you beat up on her work??? Must be that you have no TASTE.

"If you want some who cares" Add one after who. and after that you get a 10, not a nine.

:) -0-

So why you picking on me then?

What do you call Sincere Understanding hitting the water head first on the 4th of July? "Thrown" a poem by Muse heart, a child killing hack.

Id like a muse heart grilled to perfection, cut in nice slender sections. Add Bread And Mayo (no cum pls). TY. BTW, hows the amphetamines?

THANK YOU!! heres your nine. btw, lil bunny wabbit.. you think alot of yourself, you need more training with yoda and settle the shapeshifter. Oh yeah, i got me a new sword (soon to be a mutated version of a lightsaber) thats white and black, and curvy (~~~) to cut around sharp edges. like it? i call it dictionary magic, a mutated formula designed after da.

Another brilliant work.