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on The Drunkest ever by horus8
9 Jul 2003, 10:03 PM
is everyone OFF for the summer???
Almost.
um.. attempt at humor failed man... or atleast didnt manage to tickle my funny bone.
Beatifull imagery and expression: 10
hahaha
this is great man
Lovely Tombstone ;D
Wow... I'm too wrapped up in it to say anything. I'll come back later and give a better comment. For now, a 9. (This with my rule about not giving 10's although you tempted me here.)
all gone. new clothes. new shoes. Leo, do you still need me?
nice selection of words. It conveys quite a dreamy feel with the imagery. But I think it lacks something to grab the reader
sshhhh...
oki doki... hrmm could i use this to make me sword a lightsaber? ;P
Beautiful poem man, i think of all the poems ive read of yours i like this one the most. 10
ah, another good one. ;) 10
Lord, you are stoned, I thought I was smoking the goods, but my friend, you are an aqualung. This is your bravest work. I do beieve the list would look more like this. Ah Cadacus, If I didn't mention you I am now you are definitelyin the mid the top fifteen, and there are even some others, quite a few actually that caught my eye. Venus, Ranger and there are some others, I'm sure. You youngsters though eager, have many more bridges to cross, but I'll give you bonus points for being brash, and at least organizing those hallucinations in your mind in a poetic fashion.
1. Christof
2. Poet & knowit
3. Mr. Pig
4. God's wife
5. Z
6. Settle
7. horus8
8. billz
9. Nicholas Jones
10. Dark Angel (if he isn't already up there)
11. Richa
12. Wolf
13. One fingered Answer
14. Skakowski
15. Razorgrin
16. Nentwined
17. Daniella
18. Durt kl
19. the pink bunny
20. the dreamer kid
And those last two are iffy, and the first ten fluctuate by the second, because some are busier than others.
I was wondering about the title, particularly the theta bit.. what does theta represent or mean?
"tomomentary"- should be a space inbetween to and momentary.
'And poetry is reduced to a general surgeon's warning'
what does that mean?
and how does toxicity pacify rain?
Bong Shangin' at the motel
You make alot of friends fast don't you. Very good poem by the way. -10-