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I'm the same as JLVM this is instantly sobering you have a true gift of word.

That's what I'm saying sweet cheecks.

I just read the comments to this poem, and did I ever laugh, good Christ, we are a sad bunch.lol.

Well, you would know. You own it.

Lovely.

A vibrator and a Von treirs movie might have saved your life.

first ones good, i'm sure the other ones been done before though

living the life of the sick and insane? I'm not sure about that line you told me your feeling/but you aint givin/ no reason for believin (that is to say more insight needed)

http://www.jokecompany.com/archive_detail.php/cat/13/j/3139/page/1/ref/archive_list

ha ha ha ha good one good one, in the tradition of Settle. Who is me. Most of my immitators don't get it but I think you do. Childish, insulting, disgusting, strong like a horse's leg yet delicate like a country sausage wrapped in silk.

don't come to bangladesh, its full of bangladeshi's! What, why the reaction? No-one complains when its about the french and their smelly cheese-eating-surrener-monkey antics!

Um....Funny....Has a point, but....

wow....i like it, i cant understand why it is in the 'worst' place! Very confusing to me..I give it a 10

WHAT the hell?

Not bad, good work. It could use a better introduction though.. and a better title. heres a 7

the rewrite is alot better than the original. heres an 8. btw, you really need to have a better attitude concerning commentry, because changing titles to erase a low vote is a pathetic response. Plus, giving me a low rating when i respond to it by sticking a zero on your work is childish... doesnt make you look intelligent. dont take this comment to be pompous in nature, but i do admit sadly that it does seem that way. Im just trying to give you some advice not to step on you, but to help you.

this poem kicks ass. i really loved the html introduction. blessed with a 10.

This is truly something to be respected.

hrmmm. cool adaptation yoda. ;P 9.