I do believe Judy left the room, perhaps she needs you to drive her home?

This is actually funny, now that I think about it.

even though it's not a haiku interesting fuck the po po i just wanna smoke my ganja in peace.

nice poem it treads nicely

You have the gayest thermos pour I've ever witnessed. OH SWEET LORD! Good god LOL! TTM! Jesus... Unbelievable, ha!ahhhhhhhhhh, yes, quite funny. Unless you're serious? Than I'm sorry for laughing that incredibly hard and long in your face, pardon me.

You are trying to hard, you need to let go, because this poetry of yours today is just shit mate, turn around and do it again, I'm serious. It's not poetry, it sounds like the diluted message of a dyslexic cult leader huffing on low grade gasoline.

Im julia and the ogre? hrmmm. now i need to go read the tekken story to understand exactly what your saying lol. hehehe. nice poem, very creative imagination you got there. heres a 10.

At the age of 15, Jin found out that he was Kazuya Mishima' son. At the same time, he lost his mother, Jun Kazama. Jin trained himself under the supervision of Heihachi with the intention of defeating the "God of Fight", who is supposed to have killed his mother. Heihachi was not only his grandfather, but a reliable teacher. ------- this implies that your planning to kill me lol. heres a glimpse into the future: empty victory. Man, simply combining the tekken 3 story and the people of poem ranker makes a ranker story that is very entertaining and enlightens me to certain aspects. heh. whether real or imagined, its still amusing.

"What do you get when you cross an owl with a bungee chord? My ass. Nyah, haha, haha, haha, ENOUGH!! "

"What do you get when you cross an owl with a bungee chord? My ass. Nyah, haha, haha, haha, ENOUGH!! "

Hrmm.. i remninds me of the table of contents of a magazine.. hrmm.. can i be allowed to ponder a title for this one too? good work btw. blessed with 10

Haiku.. ah, i never really had much practice, actually no practice is more like it, with haikus.. but yeah, abandon the haiku idea or remake this.. could be a damn good start for a better poem though. i wont vote on this for the moment.

i like the creative way you presented the poem, buts it seems like its written by a naive lover boy... really.. which is why i dont like it. It doesnt delve into any brilliant expressions of emotion or thoughts on love, just to name a few things of its pitfalls. I cant explain more descriptively why i dont like it, its just that it gives me an unpleasant feeling.. heres a six.

OK let me inform everyone: I DID NOT WRITE THIS CRAP. TWO: Im going to ask that this username be DELETED. Im not going to have some imposter attempting to make me look like an idiot. Also, settle, i think your the one responsible for this, and its not smart to piss me off. If im wrong about my assumptions, forgive me. btw, heres a zero.

Too bad you didn't write it, cuz it's good.I was going to compliment you on improving.

I really like this poem alot. It is written well, but theres lots of room for improvement. blessed with 8.

"It is only my refection" reflection "but their simply appears to be," their should be There Nice poem, though its a little confusing, you need to be more descriptive. You have alot to work on, but you have potential. Blessed with 6

the title and the poem have nothing to do with each other. you failed miserably to make a poem about the godself within. blessed with 3

Yeah.. i dont intent to be mean or insulting.. but bachus is right... your recent pieces are.. crappy. The ideas are good, just the way you presented them suck.

dood.. you need to realize that you dont have a fucking inkling of understanding concerning the subject.. plus your limping poetically with how your attempting to poetically write about it.