DurtKL
on Untitled by no1sangelz23
25 Jun 2003, 9:14 PM
subway chipotle sandwiches are my weakness
Damn, long. Deep, deep thought. It's great!
hrmm. good.
eh, it's deep. ... how long did it take you to write that? ..?
after reading your first few lines
i debated on contuing to read
but i went against better judgement and
kept on reading
and wow
i was amazed
i felt the urge
while reading your shit
to cut my own wrists
thansk a lot psycho
Ok, here I crumble. But im going to stick to my opinion about the sister poem. If that means becoming the poetic punchline of the day, week, month (or however long that may be) then so be it.
yes, multipersonality.. confusing and effective. lalala.
i hurts too from reading this
my advice to you...
http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?i d=42391
SupremeDreamer
on Tommy, an opera in D minor, by Vagina the 3 legg'd pigeon by <{Baba^Yaga}>
25 Jun 2003, 10:25 PM
Ouch. One thing: Hermann Hesse, not Carl Jung. Though Carl Jung if i remember correctly did do some therapy for hermann.. Interesting overview, yes, indeed, quick and easy.. but I'm sorry for not providing more bullets.
SupremeDreamer
on Tommy, an opera in D minor, by Vagina the 3 legg'd pigeon by <{Baba^Yaga}>
25 Jun 2003, 10:41 PM
Oh, yes, I forgot something. Like i told dark, i did not just recently start. I recently started taking it seriously is all. Btw:
http://www.100free.com/rehash2888s/
(Nearly complete collection of written work, started when age 14 to now, age 17)
Heres more ammo captain. dissect some more.
Jeremi B. Handrinos
on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck
25 Jun 2003, 10:53 PM
An achievement of the highest order, but I thought you'd at least have a cactus or a cat Settle.
I believe it's spelled "while" young man. Carry on.
"Giving me reson to be." Dude, totally, last week my bong did the same.
"now... it donsn't seem to work at all" Is Don not feeling well?
yeh yeh... good good ... i like it. !!!
especially
insane
i feel like everything falls apart
then i look to christ
and i hate him for it
Lol. Please shutup you twit.
You sound like a fucking computer dork on a caffiene buzz going.
how deadly blee bloo blee look at me. Shut up.
Just shut the fuck up. Good god, I've never seen such idiotic chatter. This isn't even a poem, or a joke, It's nothing it's boring, it's stupid, and it says absolutely nada. Like a Mcdonalds shake that's been in the back of the car all summer, crap, crust, crud. Stolid to the max!
Please do both wrists with vertical cuts. Preferably two for each wrist and six inches long a centimeter appart angling in toward one another centered over the artery. Use a new straight razor to insure the maximum sharpness available for the deepest cut. And take a blood thinner like aspirin an hour before. Carry on.
Pop it, then let it dry like any other zit I suppose.
Brian Tiensvold
on MotherF*ckers Who Fuck Above/Two Story Apartment by JoyLuck
25 Jun 2003, 11:14 PM
heh, cool.