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DurtKL on Untitled by no1sangelz23 25 Jun 2003, 9:14 PM
subway chipotle sandwiches are my weakness
Damn, long. Deep, deep thought. It's great!
SupremeDreamer on Untitled by no1sangelz23 25 Jun 2003, 11:22 PM
hrmm. good.
Brian Tiensvold on A Promise by Elvish Jade 25 Jun 2003, 11:23 PM
eh, it's deep. ... how long did it take you to write that? ..?
JoyLuck on A Promise by Elvish Jade 25 Jun 2003, 9:51 PM
after reading your first few lines i debated on contuing to read but i went against better judgement and kept on reading and wow i was amazed i felt the urge while reading your shit to cut my own wrists thansk a lot psycho
Ok, here I crumble. But im going to stick to my opinion about the sister poem. If that means becoming the poetic punchline of the day, week, month (or however long that may be) then so be it.
yes, multipersonality.. confusing and effective. lalala.
JoyLuck on Forget by Elvish Jade 25 Jun 2003, 9:55 PM
i hurts too from reading this my advice to you... http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=42391
Ouch. One thing: Hermann Hesse, not Carl Jung. Though Carl Jung if i remember correctly did do some therapy for hermann.. Interesting overview, yes, indeed, quick and easy.. but I'm sorry for not providing more bullets.
Oh, yes, I forgot something. Like i told dark, i did not just recently start. I recently started taking it seriously is all. Btw: http://www.100free.com/rehash2888s/ (Nearly complete collection of written work, started when age 14 to now, age 17) Heres more ammo captain. dissect some more.
An achievement of the highest order, but I thought you'd at least have a cactus or a cat Settle.
Jeremi B. Handrinos on Twennotmety by Brian Tiensvold 25 Jun 2003, 11:01 PM
I believe it's spelled "while" young man. Carry on.
"Giving me reson to be." Dude, totally, last week my bong did the same.
"now... it donsn't seem to work at all" Is Don not feeling well?
Brian Tiensvold on Untitled by no1sangelz23 25 Jun 2003, 11:25 PM
yeh yeh... good good ... i like it. !!!
DurtKL on Twennotmety by Brian Tiensvold 25 Jun 2003, 11:29 PM
especially insane i feel like everything falls apart then i look to christ and i hate him for it
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Endless Karma by KagatoSan 25 Jun 2003, 7:09 PM
Lol. Please shutup you twit. You sound like a fucking computer dork on a caffiene buzz going. how deadly blee bloo blee look at me. Shut up. Just shut the fuck up. Good god, I've never seen such idiotic chatter. This isn't even a poem, or a joke, It's nothing it's boring, it's stupid, and it says absolutely nada. Like a Mcdonalds shake that's been in the back of the car all summer, crap, crust, crud. Stolid to the max!
<{Baba^Yaga}> on A Promise by Elvish Jade 25 Jun 2003, 7:44 PM
Please do both wrists with vertical cuts. Preferably two for each wrist and six inches long a centimeter appart angling in toward one another centered over the artery. Use a new straight razor to insure the maximum sharpness available for the deepest cut. And take a blood thinner like aspirin an hour before. Carry on.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on Forget by Elvish Jade 25 Jun 2003, 7:37 PM
Pop it, then let it dry like any other zit I suppose.