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on TeEn PoEtRy ShOlD dIe by teenpoetryshoulddie
24 Jun 2003, 10:23 PM
Reading this istead, unfortunately.
Indeed, beautiful work.
We would be in a world with alot less stupid things to laugh at... I think that would get a little boring. Ah well, not all teen poetry sucks.
What, No Tylenol?
And change the title, please, for fuck's sake. You don't tell people the end of a movie not even at the end. Remove both of them, good god, kids, are so fucking dramatic.
hrmmm. you have a long road ahead, yes yes, just dont run out of gas, and make sure the engine sees a mechanic, perhaps oil change would improve performance
and why is the left blinker broken? -pulled over-
I bless it with 5
Sad, yes it is when women do such things.
"ShOID dIe"? "SHOID die"? What fucking planet are you on? Perhaps instead of whining about other people's poetry you should get off your fat ass and write something readable yourself. Then when you're the top poet on this site you can be an arsehole and we won't mind.
Here's a better one:
"ILlItERate pOEts ShoUlD DiE" (Free verse) by poemwanker
Little arseholes
on an undeserving site
Writing something
to piss off others
Show it to us
Who really couldn't care less
Where would we be
If we let -=Dark_Angel=- pilot the pirate ship?
the aquarius and not interested rhyme rushes the poem along well
i think you use very quiete rhymes which gives this a gentle quality
not as much vivid imagery as in your other memory poems though
The title should be.
Wheatgerm works.
in your own mind, I'm sure you are.
"one stared world war two
while the other forced gulf war two"
This is what I love about poetry! The utter incompitence involved in making sense. Good job, Nolan. Now, back to my fruit rollup and crossword puzzle. hmmmm,4 down, starts with p, four letters. Another name for a Medevil times bard? Any Ideas? I know it's not plum or prom or poop so. what do you think?
The begining and end were brilliant, the middle liked a specific climax to why it all went that way, but that's not always a bad thing, here,8.
Yeah, wow, this is a much better edit.
"Love is like a piece of gold
Hard to find, harder to hold"
What?! You can find gold at Wal-Mart! And it's really not that hard to hold, you just put it on your finger! Don't just write it because it rhymes, it sounds so...6th grade English class.
what the fuck is this, rerun of poetic failure? miserable and without any taste.. humoristic? fuck no man, what the hell.. hillbilly poetry folks, welcome to the next millennium.
A shit yogurt with shit sprinkles. what you've done here is taken an okay movie plot and try to tell it back to us (as if were that stupid to have not watched a Pacino flick?) using the same fucking title of the movie from the perspective 'this time' of your sad stupid tiny uninformed brain. Gooooood, super, next
Hi, I'm a poet, my names Foreskinner, i also play bass in the speed metal band called "I ate careal out of my dead mother's vulva" we have a show this weekend at the Sizzler in Chino, Ca. Come check it out. We're giving away our new cd called the "Shitngdom of Shitvil' and dude, it's the shit.
Lincoln was a REPUBLICAN!
Man, WTF?