Pseudo Poetry is what it looks like.. nice and sweet, 99 cents a piece right? -sigh-

Thats how I send every sunday night, Don't you?

Grrr... Now I have to wait til next season!! They always do that! But I think it might just be worth the wait. -8-

Damn I just thought some body threw that wig out! I knew I should have found out whom it was. Pity me. Insanely funny by the way. -10-

Do you think that, in a metaphorical sense, we all wear masks? Masks that conceal our inner emotions from the prying eyes of the urchins that plague our troubled streets? Do we use masks to present an image that we hope society will find acceptable? Are we afraid to betray our actual feelings for fear of being ostracised, or even sodomised up the bum? Or do you think that's just a load of bollocks?

first two lines of second verse are good a few cliches in the first verse though

yes nice little rhyme and insight

quite interesting, similar style to 'the force that through the green fuse drives the flower' by dylan thomas. causing a certain feeling of rush of change of uncertainty

Yeah, me too.

I don't know why I keep reading your pointless poems. Yet I believe that there is still hope to be lingered upon.

I'm speechless.. beautiful indeed it is!

Extremely touching and well written. Bravo!

Sound like a case for Rumi, or oral sex. Not a bad spread of poetry Supremie. Young and flailing, but honestly passionate. I'll vote when I'm not so hammered. Please remove your copyright gibberish, it's silly and pointless. Just by writing it here alone is copyright enough young Jedi poet stoner scream from my new chrome toaster. Besides 5 years from now you'll have rewritten these to fuckville & back so relax.

Clever, maybe.. Cliche? Definately.. Question: Does staring at that aspirin bottle in the middle of the night actually provide inspiration, or just the twitch and moan of suspended boredome? ...

Thank the heavens that you copyrighted this piece Mr. Supreme. Lord knows I was this close to stealing it away and using it to polish my deluxe asswagon.

Transperancy actually, no offense, just helping your copyrighted material along.

I see potential, Indeed.

My fee for this spectacular edit? Your sole rolled in olive oil.

Well written but lacking emotion. -7-

Poem didn't do anything for me what-so-ever, But the conversation with D.A. was LMAO!!! For that alone a -10-