horus8
on Seven by Dangzter
15 Jun 2003, 2:21 PM
I want a phone call.
How do I buy these three?
http://www.everybodysmile.biz/eadenlille
Made my ears pop.
are you 11 years old or some sort of super genius writing to fuck with the minds of the inferior?
put away the thesaurus
Your right it is. I actually laughed out loud reading this. In fact I'd just like to take the time to say
Hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
Okay, nope not yet
Hahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahah
Prostitution certainly is an important issue.
Your stultifyingly original idea of someone interacting with their reflection in a pool was so stultifyingly original that were it not for the helpful hint at the end of the piece, I would have keeled over and died of confusion. Ace.
When you substituted live for "leave" is when my mailbox exploded.
I liked it up until my left hand turned into a radioactive porta potty and regurgitated blue curdled turds about my work space.
Hey, sup man, its a bit smoky in here. You gonna pass that joint or what?
Sorry, I guess you fail to see Horus Mocking you. Look there he is, and Oh whats that little freeverse down there for? Mock, Mock. <-Just messing with you, not nearly as good as your other 2 so far. -7-
I too have frequently delivered myself of the opinion that the satin walls of purposeful isolation have tasted betrayal and, much like the vengeful Sun, have succumbed to the raindrops of concrete complexion. Nevertheless, one cannot but wonder from time to time that perhaps one's opinions, though artfully decorated in the plush velveteen plumes of purposeless consolidation, make about as much sense to non-spastics as the senseless ramblings of a half-baked nincompoop with some heavy shopping. Halos were never meant to rust, my friend. Never meant to rust...
When I was halfway through reading your poeme I thought to myself 'I bet the last line of this poeme is "I'm sorry"'.
Oxify it.
I liked it until i got past halfway.
A little to wanna be artsy for me. Yet...