lovely.

This poem is the sublime of pimpliness and verbose insipidity.

loquidy? Bravo, may I put a picture of Mao in?

Disgustingly enjoyable and witty. I will give you an 8 if you promise to seek therapy over these golden showers.

yes this brings it much closer. the reader is not distracted as much I think.

What a lovely poem, and with a nice message. I love it!

"(words to Aeries’ Theme from FF7)" What does that mean? You didn't write this? Because, this unlike your other work is tolerable, so I'm just assuming that's because you copied it, right?!

Did you mean Aries? As in the greek gos of war, or Aeries, as in 'an' tuskless walrus? Because, i need to know for personal reasons.

lol. You're right. Good god you are the pinkbunnyof doom. I mean, yeah, I had my doubts but never again this is indeed something I will never understand (at least not while you're in earshot) I'm sure whe you're gone though... We'll bust this fucker open like a pinata and analyse your horribly obvious flaws, such as mouthing cock and touching your bum (when you're asleep we'll talk behing your bunny trailor). Which will be at 9:00 pm I imagine from the parental rating on this poem of rated (T) for toddlers. Don't you ever attack, or get passionate about something pink bunny, I mean for the love of piss! bring the DOOM not the loom?

Yes, how could an adult ever expect to understand the mind of a teenager? They just don't know what it's like!

When they're ready she just walks away? Are you sure?

Perhaps, you should call him an "ass-hat"? A very poignant word created by razorgrin I believe.

Glad to see a "decent" poem, at last!!

froot loop. pimple is correct though.

an olympic swimmer next to the rope lane divider?

what the hell is all that nonsense on yer p/r homepage? do you really believe that? I don't.

am I gay if I associate with the lot of ya?

I remember when I used to do that.lol.

You're right, just like that.

Nice enough but the punch you packed was short of winding me 7