INTRANSIT
on Angels & Dinosaurs by Jeremi B. Handrinos
6 Jun 2003, 6:30 AM
The repetetive-ness monster is here. I know you write a phenomenal amount and that you've allowed yourself to be distracted for the moment. IF you like these scribblings, then do them a propellor thing they deserve.
Aint I the lucky apple of your eye?
What a scientist you are.
like I always say, less is more.
I think, having conquered the realm of AIDS limericks, you should move on to more challenging ground, such as AIDS triolets. I've written one to start you off:
I recently contracted a virus called AIDS
from having gay sex with a homo.
Now I'll have to give up butt raids:
I recently contracted a virus called AIDS.
It all started out as a game of charades
And now I can't have bum sex no mo.
I recently contracted a virus called AIDS
from having gay sex with a homo.
My friends engine dropped a valve once. he brought it home in a bucket that night. 3 for the rod. 3 for the ex "hero" 2 for Merle, 2$ for a stiff cup of coffee.
Wow, now that was an edit. lol. i was expecting a page, that made me giggle, good call.
I claim this as an idiotic, minless ramble.
Hahaha. The sad part is that this isn't even me.
The mad arab ALHAZAR, this must mean the book of the dead. The ancient ones are about. flee, flee to the safety of a moist towellette.
Clive barker's surrogate dildo.
This feeling, so so deep, I am grammatically unable to explain it or spell it.
Macabre 8
But your haiku don't rock man 5
I suggest you change it to smurfs and poodles. Your street poetry is very coming of age! Bravo.
Have you ever even been to Macedonia? No. I suggest you write on Dumbo goes to Whittier and back to Tomkat. Here's a 4 for writing about something you know nothing about.
It's amazing how you've fooled everyone into believing that you aren't Mr. Pig. I am lost for words.
What no cement to mark the occasion?
Twas i that tenned your pen.
I see you've worked hard at making original and inventive rhymes:
mind
mine
mine
mine
time
good work. 10.