vulcan
on A Thought by darkshark
30 May 2003, 3:26 AM
Really open-eneded life!nice9
what? please im glad this isnt longer
lovely.8
i love it
found my self singing along :) -9-
Very nice
very moving -9-
runnerup
And what has the meaning of Cauliflower = Cauliflower have a thing to do with the price of tea in China?
ma nu sure do like writtin bout dissease of the world dont u
cynical but very good
Would work as a song with if you make a chorus. Nice job though, i like the title. (9)
loved it
Not bad, the line
shooting youâs amusing.
seems out of sync with your rhyme scheme though
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
29 May 2003, 9:04 PM
Out of all the poetry you've written, I think this one is one of the best-written; it's humorous, and enjoyable.
memeorable lines!liked it extremely!
ummm....i may not know talent when i see it but this free-verse has a lot of potential...and it lacks a certain something...i can quite put my finger on it..o well...u can go rank mine now and put them all zeros!
i know how it feels
very good -8-
h'm?
LOL Makes me never want to piss you off.
this is very nice john