Re: Felice Et Eroticum Est. by Ulterius	Dr Toilet 85.210.196.90	15-Jan-07/4:11 PM
Bravo!
regarding some deleted poem...	Dr Toilet 85.210.196.90	15-Jan-07/4:13 PM
Tedious old bollocks.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dr Toilet 85.210.196.90	15-Jan-07/4:14 PM
I just noticed you spelled Equinox wrong too so I shall amend my previously over-generous score of 1 to a nice round 0.
Re: Same old rancour (a yellow stream of consciousness) by ecargo	Dr Toilet 85.210.196.90	15-Jan-07/4:16 PM
Utter bollocks except fore the bit about pissing.
Re: The huntsman's revenge by Stephen Robins	Dr Toilet 85.210.196.90	15-Jan-07/4:17 PM
Doggerel but quite amusing doggerel. A bit tedious.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/5:44 PM
Fixed.
Re: ritual of now intensified by nentwined	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/7:04 PM
Ahh! Cof-fee!
Re: selfhood, through extrospection by nentwined	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/7:10 PM
And so you are! Kaolin Fire!
Re: The Sleep Fantastic by nentwined	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/7:23 PM
Very sing-song. I hear the last verse as a loud chorus sung over and over!
Re: Fury by wilco	Dovina 75.82.85.162	15-Jan-07/7:32 PM
It’s the kind of exposition and soap-boxing I’ve been blasted for these several years, and the kind of thing I still get all gushy about. But “irony of fate is lost” – is too nebulous even for me. Good otherwise.
Re: innocent voyeur by nentwined	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/7:36 PM
Excellent stuff!
Re: do androids dream? by nentwined	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/7:37 PM
Well said.
Re: clay or mud (hertz donut version) by nentwined	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/7:38 PM
An unfinished piece---
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 75.82.85.162	15-Jan-07/7:42 PM
"Touched" is an interesting word. It can also mean crazy. If used so more than on possible meaning attaches, interest in the poem rises. Here, it's just showing two of the meanings without that connection.
Re: Recognition by nentwined	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/7:48 PM
I liked this a lot! Could see an easy progression type poem- next stanza: Benefiting two..
Re: knowledge building on knowledge by nentwined	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/7:49 PM
doesn't do it for me-
Re: standing outside the door by nentwined	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/7:51 PM
The "don't bug me" I take it refers to the other person waiting to get into the bathroom, named in the title-
Re: Censor by nentwined	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/7:53 PM
So the censor is XXXing all those thoughts or lines- like pee filtered in your body by the liver- still not a great poem, though I guess I understood it-
Re: dit da haiku by nentwined	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/7:57 PM
someone had to write it!
Re: on my hog by nentwined	Jill Stockinger 67.172.190.253	15-Jan-07/7:59 PM
I got it. Not great stuff, though.