Ranger
on Ode To Mushroomhead by Beseech
16 May 2003, 7:58 AM
Ye-es
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
16 May 2003, 7:52 AM
Language!
It's proper name is
Tab.
Glorious.
AT LAST THE COLLEGE HAS UNBLOCKED THE RANKER!!!
I am now in a generous mood, have a ten on the house.
Your bridge? Well, let's just say... Impressive, to put it mildly.
Yes, interesting question
funny cute
but the last four lines a little too cute
Sorry, but I find this a bit corny
We are here to test your beak to forehead ratio upon different modes of transportation. That, and to kill shit. Didn't you hear? Last night I bent a plastic spoon with a cricket powered shoehorn at ten paces from the hip. So, you're to late.
PATHETIC ATTEMPT AT POETRY
Most certainly, but for how long do we think the ranker will remain unblocked? Here this made me laugh, and passing references to the fjords earns this an 8
HHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
Skaldik brew or nothing.
Perhaps.
cheeky.
ice cream slips then drips
down the cone over fingers
onto lap snorkel
No, but damn good
Great! Kaboom. Fodder, and duck butter all over my fucking breakfast roll.
Such a diverse use of language,
Most poems on here are so prosaic
this is more psychadaelic and exciting
Your parents should be sterilized and dropped off at the nearest Christian science center for allowing you to be this incredibly retarded. you on the other hand have a future in politics, or forklift operating.
I see you've made good use of the Oxford Dictionary of Clichés. Good Effort. 10/10.
my favourite of yours so far, a lot to interest