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on Senses by lunar
30 Mar 2003, 1:19 PM
gr8 chat up line. aah, a love poem, i love you!!!
i love your work, and i love you more, im gonna give you a huge hug. actuallyi wont cos ull get a restraining order :p but i wud if i cud
Simply superb.
indeed.
I like the last line. It really connects with the reader.
It would of worked better if your ball turned into a bomb.
ah. Now that the smoke's gone, and the air is all clear. Those who were right there have a new kind of fear. That's whynI say "hay man nice shot".
GQT. Awarde.
Why does he wipe them with a shoe-horne, which is used to ease the shoe onto the foote! I thought poem was ok, but an Gentleman should know for what his shoe-horne was created.
If Jesus mispelled as terriffically as you, he'd listen to more Filter!
i love this beautiful work, just like your eyes, and yesi have seen them. just to scare you there
you said it was pointless, and pointless poems get 0. its not even a poem, just a list
Hey man nice shot, I wish I coulda mey you. but now it's a little late.
Flies hover over shit, but 'above' is not a term that they pray too very often... because of the maggots, you see?.
Again?
Unreadable tripe.