horus8
on Hippy's Ode to Eternity by bondjedi
13 Mar 2003, 3:19 AM
Call it the Dove of doom!
DUDE YOU SUCK AND I DONT EVEN LIKE FOOTBALL
All over my bullets and everything.
they should make scratch and sniff pocket sized momma boxes, sis. Do you concure?
it's a great poem but I still have to limerick you:
I think "lost in america"'s lost
and would be wheree'r he was tossed
he skipped Bangledesh
and some chick's willing flesh
because of the cultural cost.
cant you find anything better to write about then a fucking football team
Go to hell you can't write.
Nice read. Good strong sounds. I know what dun means, but don't get dun on dun?
Hi,
I would have drown myself in your skin
I think this line could be better.
Just yesterday I checked in and thought "When is god'swife going to submit? I love her stuff"
Today I come and find not one but two great poems.
Could we have a translation of the Spanish? I almost have it but it's been a while since high school.
"bocked" i think you meant blocked? i giggled a bit at this one, cute. ummm. didn't want to talk to me about something? i suck at using instant mess, but you could call me if you want, or is that thought too provocative for you?a
GQT AWARDE! 10! FUNNY FUNNY stuff. the first line cracked me up. even looking up at it still, makes me laugh. odd really.
Jesus, don't they all... Please God, just send the aliens with the anal probe back. I'm either fucking home-sick, or so psychic, tomorrows yesterday again. Blarg, i'm gonna cook this ground hog once and for all.
reverse your name, and add an h. awash, but with what? I feel a warm bath full of pink carnations and vanilla salt coming on. I just bought some plum scented candles too. I think i'll play my new album while I soak. It's called 'Jesus was Jew too so sue' by the Chirpets.
you have potential
very nice...
Yep.
Boy, when you pick your titles you really go out on a limb. That should be your next title "limbs".
Well thought out.
started strong but diminished after the first 4 lines. Too many commas, although it was intentional I guessing. But the idea is very good in my opinion.