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DurtKL on A Question Of Perception by Jigg 5 Mar 2003, 5:43 PM
...ur good at the ryhme...and it flows...it'll be a good song
INTRANSIT on The Drunkest ever by horus8 5 Mar 2003, 5:02 PM
Why the hell not.
TanHand on Hecate, and the high hunt by <{Baba^Yaga}> 5 Mar 2003, 1:33 PM
THEN SHE POOFS INTO A VAMPYRE AND FLYS AWAY FLAP FLAP FLAP FLAP (RIGHT???)
DurtKL on Hecate, and the high hunt by <{Baba^Yaga}> 5 Mar 2003, 5:51 PM
u like greek mythology don't u
Bachus on Unholy War by marvelis 5 Mar 2003, 6:00 PM
The American word used to be one million dead indians, ten million dead buffalo, but now it's just Steve Martin and Queen Latiffa which just peeves me off. How about you?
Bachus on some deleted poem 5 Mar 2003, 6:05 PM
(in a high italian tenor) I sing a sonnet to mildred, i sing a sonnet to phil, a hole in posterior grayness. just as long as they'll give me more pills.
Bachus on Prometheus sang for vultures by horus8 5 Mar 2003, 5:51 PM
Yes we are very sad today, thanks Durt.
DurtKL on A Losing Streak by Jigg 5 Mar 2003, 5:41 PM
too many questions! lol i too chuckled at the last line...gj
Bachus on The Blooding by Mr Pig 5 Mar 2003, 5:41 PM
Fucking Babbit, maybe not, but you could only be three others do you remember Nick Monson, or something other by chance? By the way this poem is fucking amazing, and baby i aint too shy to say. I've read it ten times and each time it just doubles up, really, upon further review of your work, i'm convinced you are dark angel, but settle could do this too. If you were a woman I would love you like no other slave, but you're not. sooooooooo. i concure, and somehow you have me believing my friend that you did this, which frankly concerns me. lol. here's another ten keep them coming God knows i aint working, might as well read. And drink, heavily.
OneFingerAnswer on A Losing Streak by Jigg 5 Mar 2003, 5:24 PM
The last line gave me quite the chuckle. The rest was decent enough. 6.
DurtKL on Prometheus sang for vultures by horus8 5 Mar 2003, 5:38 PM
the idea of the titan singing as his liver is being eaten out amuses me...i think it was an eagle tho ;) but anyways i like it good job
Bachus on The Drunkest ever by horus8 5 Mar 2003, 5:30 PM
Can i just say fuck wood that though they think you me you aint. you this pussy. http://gangbox.com/mp3/The%20first%20prize.mp3 Don't lie to yourself fuck nob. pasty note number 5,896 from the mountains' of madness.
Bachus on vent tent by Crakyamuni 5 Mar 2003, 5:11 PM
Speaking of squeezing juice. here's a molatov cocktail. http://www.gangbox.com/mp3/my%20name%20is%20pan.mp3 omething i did in one take between shoe fittings, and reading asian jugs.
i like this sort of thing. paranoid, evasive and bitter. 8
Have you seen him dressed in gray? When he looks so very gay? And he minces all around, while he dances to the sound, have you seen him dressed in gray?
horus8 on The Fire Giver by OneFingerAnswer 5 Mar 2003, 3:29 PM
Yes. "I'm glad you metioned the content because I want to get that out of the way early. This isn't about God and Satan as dieties or religious figures. Rather it's about "good" and "bad." One way I was taking it was the idea that good behavior doesn't attract much attention. I actually had one of my classmates from highschool in mind. He was a "good kid" and all through high school he was B/C average. Three days before graduation he ran himself into a tree in the car his parents had bought him as a graduation present. He lived through it even though he hadn't meant to. When I asked him why he did it he said "To be remembered." To be honest, I think it worked." by the way this is profound, thanks, i understand now. Sorry about earlier my brain is acting up again.
Hmmm... I wrote something simular in a poem not too long ago. http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=42131 Yours is short, sweet (or bitter rather), and to point. 7.
<{Baba^Yaga}> on respirometrics by bunniesnangels 5 Mar 2003, 1:26 PM
Clean heat.
DurtKL on One More Mile by marvelis 5 Mar 2003, 5:54 PM
eminem had 8 miles