BULBOUS ROOT VEGETABLES?

Speak for your self, Baron von Assfacen.

Kiss it. s

Bloody good.

You know what's funny? Apparently i said the same thing over a month ago. Why would you not fix that? It makes you look terribly retarded.

AND SO THE HORUSETTLE WARS BEGAN.

Sometimes the gold gets swallowed, but then it comes out your ass buried undered a pile of crap. This needs to be dug through. 

Isn't "hath" in line 2? The end is better than the beginning. That is my personal flaw. e

Knowledge.

S6 as S1. Start of with the bang. (pun intended) You make my clit erect. S

Scoundrel.

I know it's you, Dark Angel. It's obvious.

Both can also be slapped, or have other things done to them. Then, there's the man in Naked Lunch who taught his asshole to talk...

Black jelly on your tongue, indeed. Bravo.

A suggestion: try and ease the connections between the lines. Make the rhythm more natural, easy, as spoken word. This is base carbon, and pressure must be applied; too much, and striations ruin the effect; too little, marcasite. You, sir, are a smooth-tongued devil. I sense it is not beyond your ken to make the needed modifications. I anticipate the boldness of the results. Accept this seven, for now. I assure you there is an eleven in hiding. Your task will be to draw it out.

That's natural.

"I advise you take head in what I say, prepare". Okay, i'll take head? And an arm too? The word you were looking for is 'heed' As in heed your face it's not yours vulvanator. Regardless of the fact that your 'subject and theme' is a bigwheel in the shadow of a harley (in theme terms). i felt your pain. here's a six.

Your short stanza hurt this most; they are awkward as the years they sspeak of. Refine these, and, miller's daughter, you have spun gold.

Nice rotation. Put a Villanelle to music yet? I'm sending you a dozen ashtrays, I'm tired of seeing cigarette burns in your carpet, drapes, dog. What say? Send two dozen? Done. Later Gator.

BECAUSE YOU ARE A FREAK MR. CHOADKE. HOW ABOUT SPACE MOUNTAIN INSTEAD.0.Y