Isnt 3 days the rough amount of time ffrom admittancee for a birth to release, also? Nicely done Mrs. G.

Hope? Fear? Justice? Systematic? Dogmatic? Pragmatic? A.S.T.H.M.A.T.I.C.------------> --------------> issues <------- Great use of "Nicaragua" to rhyme with "peanuts"

Love the first stanza. And the compost/ garden imagery works with that but the soldier/pill/seesaw thing doesn't jibe to me. I think I could dance to it though.

hmm... well we all have to start somewhere.

Packs a mean punch. Loved the ending, with its coming of age blood. A blurring of the line. I have to re-read the rest.

the first line of the last couplet should be the first line of the poem. Then the senses, then the final line. what do you think?

Senses is the second track off the first New Order album.

Maybe it's somethin' I'm born to hula

Insanity isn't sour. 3.

"I'm not sure if the exit I want is labeled" lol. the synthetic red and cream wet stones were nice too. the title? only works if i'm behind you, your skirt is plaid, and flipped over the back of your head. that is all.

Why by the age of 35, I've not reaad that book is beyond me! A most excellennt poem, however. I seeem to have deeevelopeed a stutter. To go wiht my funnny walk, of coursee..

GOLDEN Q TIP... Why? well... deer blood and private school of course.

Tee hee. That last one is hilarious. I grant you a ten because I'm feeling strangely generous, and also because the poem that came up when I came on here a moment ago was absolutely dreadful. When exactly is this production, by the way?

Bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha! Tee hee hee hee hee. Giggle giggle. I'm sorry, I haven't stopped giggling since I first read this. This is one of the funniest pieces I've ever read here. Please, please, PLEASE tell me this is one of your non-serious ones.

I love your poems and I'd love if you'd take a look at some of mine and tell me what you think. I'm sure you get this request often being as talented as you are but I'd trule appericiate it. Oh yeah... 9. (I don't give tens because a ten is perfection and the day someone writes a pefect poem is the day we all stop ecept maybe Dark Angel who seems to aim for imperfection.)

Supergrom! backside method over the snow bunny doing a face plant... (with tits included) Asta lavista baby 10!

There's a lot of cliche in the language ("caged bird")bit, but if you polished it a little, it could be good.

Hi bunny. I know we haven't always seen eye to eye, but I'm confident that if you provide a full and frank apology, we can forget about this rather unpleasant business. Friends? The lines, "That light is hope Without it she'd die" are beautiful, by the way.

Sell out.

Change stream to steam...it shows the power and vapid sense for the change that you're seeking.