TanHand
on Liberal's Lament, 2003 by Frass
8 Feb 2003, 9:46 AM
NOT CLEAR ENOUGH DUDE
Ahhhh!!! Test tube monkeys eating brain!!! The Pain, The Horror, Oh The Pain!!!
MY NAME IS PEPITO SUAREZ AND AND AND....angie....angie
How interesting. You've really opened my eyes with this poem. You're poetandknowit, aren't you?
lol
ANGIE....ANGIEEEEE.....AIN'T IT GOOD TO BE ALIVE...ANGIE...ANNNGIE....YOU CAN'T SAY WE NEVER, TRIE-IE-IE-IED HA HA HA HA HA HA JUST CAN'T GET ENUF
I can relate to the sentiment, but it seems like it was written in the style of a fifth grader who just got shot down by his crush. If you're a fifth grader--good job! If not.....uhh, better luck next time.
The universe just seems so big and uncaring, doesn't it? And life too short... I like the rhyming scheme--simple--but the flow could have been better in spots. 'Sides that, I like.
EVERYTHING THEY TOLD ME ABOUT THE RENNAISANCE WAS A LIE!!! I HAVE BEEN WASTING MY VERY LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!! A MAN IS NOT A PIECE OF FRUIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
swank, cad. the best thing you have written. nice job.
Yes as a religion buff I'm confused by the three day thing as well. But other than that your writing is profound as usual.
I HAD SEX WITH MY POTS AND PANS
Bill Z. Bub just jerked off all over my secret stash of dime store wingtips.
.:: THESE COLONS AND PERIODS SHOWCASE MY DESIGN SKILLS ::.
Oh, you're all alone again. Well pass me the chainsaw, I'm going to cut my heart out because the sorrow is so unbearable.
Sucks, delete. Try writing some poems about the deafening silence that is living alone in the world or something. 9.
That's quite a powerful poem. I feel the emotion.
SWELL!
all about i
oh and one more thing: Angie.....Angie...ha ha ha