drow.

The Lorde of Chirpe is still loyal, and i , his fathfull scabbard... will hold thee... cupped.

TYPICAL NENTWINIED STUFF

Pretentious shite. Well, at least I'm honest.

Excellent Lad! However, for being involved in carnal shenanigens with ranking officers WITHOUT inviting me, your Unit Commander, I have no choice but to punish you. Get down and give me twenty.....oh, yeah, just like that, baby, oooh.....

I've heard plantains are pretty good for curing the blues. http://www.geocities.com/powergasm_now/articles/homemade_pussy_device_by_ernstbl.htm

I would just call this baking powder. is mucho funny, que no?!

A bit predictable.

Your a little too vague. Who is she and what happened that caused the faith to die? Most Importantly What Can't You Take? I like the Idea and what you barely get across but you need more detail. -6- For now but I think you can make it better.

But let others take it AS a no. Seems just a slight bit redundant. -6-

What? Do you consider yourself intersting and complex, pity.

lose this line: "On the eve of doom." fix the ???. this hits hard.

i believe that this poem would work miracles, if you sustituted "soap" for "stop".

Ten more minutes, you can do it.

Being part hungarian, I think I can help you out here: first of all, it's spelled pollack, second, the slur for Hungarians is bohunk, third, the hungarian term for paprika is paprikosh.

Is this a prediction based on your interpretations of world history?

Now that was interesting and for a second the numbers had me a little confused, but I get it now and I like what I see(even if not many other people here will because its got the whole bleeding heart teen thing going on and they hate that) so I gave it a -8-. 020803

Ummm... But in a good way so -10-

...poor janitor...

A good sermon.