INTRANSIT
on nightly by <~>
10 Feb 2003, 6:25 AM
now try it in a bed that shakes noisily all night.
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Jesus christ I just downloaded Sergeant Pepper, I don't remember it sucking shit this bad. Gimme helter skelter any day.
you need to get laid, but still good work
Wow you wrote all of this this year jesus fuck what are you the fucking Isaac Newton of poetry. Not bad. 8.
Wow thanks for telling me. Jesus christ why not just number the stanzas and change the title to DIDACTIC adj.:
Worth working on. I mean that in a good way. 8. Work on the flow, although I like the disjointedness. I like the humanity interspersed with inhumanity, I like the trivialities. Smooth out the visual and verbal noise, twist the stronger signal around your ring finger.
Dad i don't know whe... you know we'll have a good time the...
You have all your male chromosomes shining like icicles in the setting sun, for B movie appreciation you gotta read dark angels 'zombie flesh eaters' its a f***g party. -9-
You have all your male chromosomes shining like icicles in the setting sun, for B movie appreciation you gotta read dark angels 'zombie flesh eaters' its a f***g party. -9-
Top o' the mornin' to ya lass! D.C. Got ugly on me Sun. Tangled with a four wheeler. No injuries though.
How I wish I could swim as I find myself drowning in your depth.
Found a possible solution to the eskimo/fish problem will post when I can. happy monday!
nice :)
Hey at least their relics actually exist
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
9 Feb 2003, 6:52 PM
nice work, unlike ranger i don't know how political you ment it to be, but i think it works :) 8
:)
This is really dire. And it ain't a limerick.
Quite Beautiful, you old romantic.
worthy of a 9