I can relate to this poem and all the memories. It's very touching.

i love it

very nice. :)

realy good that made me piss!!!!!! please do some more.

Not as touching as 'Goodbye Dad', but still I like this one. Perhaps a little more intimacy into this one?

I know its probably just one of those random things seeing as to how this was here before i even joined poemranker but your first "dootle" looks like a bunny and this is just so cool so 10

not your best work but still interesting so i'll give it a 7

Ok a Poem about vegatables that mentions Dr. Lector? Just for mentioning the last name of Hannibal you Would get a ten by me but still, Cabbage? Hows an 8 sound.

Wow, I wish i Liked my dad that much. Almost sounds a little homo the broken heart. still its good work and a ten by me.

You said i was like charles manson? Like you have room to talk. your creepy. But oddly enough i find this poem so funny i gave it a ten. now i need to go gouge me eyes out for reading this.

not as funny as 3. might it be possibble to get you to write a 4th? these are just too interesting.

Beautiful

Eww... Sick but not as good as the others this get a 7. It might have been more if i had any clue as to what scat was.

Nice title. I felt like that too(although never on a horse).

such depth i wouldn't even dare to try and phathom the the meaning but some how it sings to my soul. Execellent poem.

Whoa, this is quite....ummm....interesting. All of them seem to work well but the last one. nice job, what fetish is next?

Great feeling behind your words but you got a little abstract toward the end. Kin would also sound cooler if you replaced it with breathern <- (Probably mispelled that but who cares). I give it a nine.

Well, that was quite the angst-wank. Surprised you could keep it up as long as you did. Go put on some damn clearasil.

nicest words razorgrin has ever wrote but he is right. this is a kick ass poem

Beautiful, just beautiful.