must not have been hidden to well if you found it but nice as far as a Haiku goes so I give it a 9. P.S. Add the words "in Bed" to all your fortunes cookie sayings and they take on a whole new meaning.

can't really say anything that hasn't been said already, whatev, nice

d'oh!

you will go on a long journey

The second half is excellent.

you can write better then me so i got to give u props 4 that. Also one of the best poems i've read 2date on this site. I like it when people say what they feel, most users on this site write to get points and please

nice, i like when you have to reread sopmething, it's a sign that its good work, i'll give it a 10

Well this does show moderate talent. We all know that you are capable of far more superior works...It provided something else for me to think about. ThX, Ranger. l8r. I kinda like ya. YOu have a good personality

Wow were screwed up fairy tale you got there but i liked it till i got to the captain part but it got good again with the wolf so here is a great big Eight

I agree its a ten but you might change threw to through. It'd make it so that someone didn't mentally trip over your words, unless that was what you were going for.

Blub! Last stanza is magic. mmm.

nice bit. Is it a poem? Sure, if you say it is. But whats Sturgis?

The title of the film should be in quotations not apostrophes. That is unless you put quotations around what the character on the answering machine is saying, which would be proper and justify what your are doing at that point. Is "Weneverlaughedsohard" (note proper use) a word. I looked it up and it was not in the dictionary.

This poem drools with sentiment that lacks thought beyond intended greeting card mentality. Maybe you should actually trying think about the poems you write instead of driveling all of the time. Send this to any competent magazine in the world, and tell me I am wrong for saying these things. You can tell you read and wedding and funerals. That is about the gist of the depth here. But, hey, the sentiment is nice.

There are few things better that sex with one you love, and I love the way you've captured it.

your a Mondern Day Confusus

original. strange but original. bsed soley on that a ten.

Very sweet. I'm a sucker for break ups so its an 8.

Its nice now i can't wait to see the end product

Been there done that and i like this one. So i give you an dime.