Underwater math is a beautifuL and novel idea.

Is this about Amanda?

A load of crap, or carp, all depending.

A little heavy for my taste, but a definite improvement from your other stuff. One thing that struck me: "a cry for help" sounds a little silly preceded by "wail in torment." You either need somehting equally as forceful there, or nothing at all.

25 anonymous 10's! Your worse than Bush with his Floridian chads.

You reached really deep into the crap bin for this one, huh?

Why are all your poemes so racist? Black people have just as much right to bask on this planet as you or I. But you won't even let them come out at night to feed. How dare you!?

I am glad your back as your work is quality, but this is too kooky for me this is the only one of yours i have found stagment, however it is not a 1 its at least a 5 but thats poemranker for you dodgy votes are rife from time to time, nice to have u back sir.

We had spring rolls on New year's eve. As opposed to my longpig suggestion. I dig spring as a season, though not as an odour. 8, as it caused me to think of at least two things while reading it.

Nice, Pygmalion getting very frustrated. The violence is very well done, which is rare.

Eww..nationalism and poor writing. Fail!

This is good, especially the first 2 stanzas. However, the use of "And then" at the beginning of the 6th stanza lead be to believe that whatever was in the 7th stanza was going to be the pinnacle of the poem, when in fact, I thought it came full circle in the 8th stanza. Maybe changing the order would smoot it out? I could just be missing something though. Overall, quite beautiful.

I don't necessarily agree with your message, hoewever, this is one of the better anti-war pieces I have read from the most current rash of them. So many anti-war poems come off as hypocritical because they sound so hateful and violent themselves, however, you do it with an almost sentimental value. Not bad.

Best biking movie ever made, although if you notice when he it topping 50 plus MPH behind the semi he is in his small chain ring. But, hey, it is a movie. It is sad you titled such a bad poem for such a great sports movie. Shame on you.

A nice concept but I think the overall effort need more thought.

Why did you put this propaganda here? This is a poetry site.

Wow, it is like dyslexic jungle fever.

You are the one true king of the Masonic order of odd balls.

Still the best poem on the site. I would kill the all cap thing, but damn, who cares, this is just good. Had to come read it again.

The flip flopping of voice and context is awkward. There a a few nice lines, but there is still work to be done here.