rad.

Great poem Mrs. God.

How is this a poeme? All you've done is written some prose and then added a line break after every clause. I'm sure you'll be a popular poete in no time!!!! 10

LOL YOU POSTED A POEME CALLED 'LONGING' RIGHT AFTER SOMEONE ELSE DID. THIS IS TERRIBLE.

I downloaded you singing this from gangbox. Its a cool Song you should become a singer.

Keep Up the good work famenglory.

Not Bad for a chode but It seems a little repetive i gave it a six

Not bad. In fact, I like it. Quite a bit. Very good.

enjoyable, evocative, and nifty. I saw the lonesome walker.

Yikes you got alot of anger packed into those 15 lines there. its sweet dude perfect ten.

I tried to just leave it as a "Not for me" type of poem but with random insisting that I read it (I got it 8 times in a row and 10 of 12) I finally did and discovered how truely aweful this poem is.

Hey don't let these other guys get you down. I like it. Its simple but honest.

sounds lyrical and cynical thats cool though-7?

whats the point of this? it's too, too personal. like acid visuals that you can't relate to anyone.?

It's my goal to be able to write like you. I think I'll send this to my ex amanda.

"death friends" or "death, friends"? And what's so decent about passion?

If you're going to invoke my unholy name, please spell it correctly! It's either Beelzebub or Bill Z. Bub. And make sure the pentagram is nice and big. And a virgin to "sacrifice" would be nice. In the future be sure to check your copy of the Dungeons & Dragons Monster Manual for the correct spelling of the names of Demons and Devils.

Wow. Anybody have a gong?

HOW DOES TH

Wow. Again I'm impressed. Very deep and true. Like in a higher level hippy spiritual kind of way.