Re: A DANCE OF NO TUNE by stevopoet	Dovina 70.38.78.229	19-Oct-06/11:43 AM
"Heaping up dance on my hips" - good line. But starting every line with an "ing" word is a bit boring. "Shaking ones head" takes the "me" out of it. Is English your second language? If so, not bad.
Re: connect the dots by daniella	Dovina 70.38.78.229	19-Oct-06/11:46 AM
Ok, I looked at the site, but didn't stay there long. If you have a political statment to make in a poem, it would be better to make it, I think, rather than just referung to a URL.
Re: Smalltalkers by D. $ Fontera	Dovina 70.38.78.229	19-Oct-06/11:50 AM
Sounds like what my father called "beating artound the bush." Not very well organized.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 70.38.78.229	19-Oct-06/11:52 AM
Has a nice rattle of words. Drop the last line, I say. But you probably have some reason for it.
Re: Smalltalkers by D. $ Fontera	D. $ Fontera 129.82.153.13	19-Oct-06/12:53 PM
hence the title
Re: Israel (Through The Eyes Of One Jewish Soul) by slana5	Engelbert Humpalot 80.225.209.163	19-Oct-06/5:51 PM
Staggeringly repulsive load of old garbage!
Re: May Sinners Rot In Fucking Hell! by Sing4Jesus!	Engelbert Humpalot 80.225.209.163	19-Oct-06/5:53 PM
Fabulous title and the words live up to it. This deserves to be the worst poem on this site for ever!
Re: Grab Out For J. Christ! by Sing4Jesus!	Engelbert Humpalot 80.225.209.163	19-Oct-06/5:54 PM
Horrendous!
Re: Wanking In The Bucket by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 80.225.209.163	19-Oct-06/5:55 PM
Great. I love wanking.
regarding some deleted poem...	Engelbert Humpalot 80.225.209.163	19-Oct-06/5:56 PM
Horsedung.
Re: MRS Degree by Miggy	drnick 24.176.22.254	20-Oct-06/10:11 AM
This has to be country lyrics because the only way you could get away with this simplistic nonsense is if you were singing it to a bunch of inbred republicans. Do you honestly think you're improving? Do you even care? Do you actually spend the amount of time from one post to another for working on these lyrics? Let me break it down for you: YOU ARE TERRIBLE, THESE ARE THE WORST "LYRICS" I HAVE SEEN/HEARD SINCE YOUR LAST POST. EITHER STOP WRITING OR HEADBUTT THE SHARP END OF A KNIFE.
Re: Pope Benedict And The Limbo Problem by Edna Sweetlove	drnick 24.176.22.254	20-Oct-06/10:13 AM
Amazing, I need to go rethink my life.
Re: A Beard Most Foul by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	Ranger 62.252.32.15	20-Oct-06/10:56 AM
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Re: Slur by MacFrantic	Dovina 70.38.78.229	20-Oct-06/3:42 PM
Nothingness and everything? Have at it.
Re: connect the dots by daniella	pete 62.56.86.85	21-Oct-06/6:43 AM
I looked at the site and watched the whole film and would recommend any others to do the same; i think this counts as a bit more than a political statement; 10 for the lead 6 for the poem
Re: Work by half.italian	pete 62.56.86.85	21-Oct-06/6:48 AM
lol :)
Re: weather poem part 1: the wolf journal by nypoet22	pete 62.56.86.85	21-Oct-06/7:02 AM
well; got blown away by this; took it slow and let it speak to me , then saw all this sour-face bitchin and wondered what that was all about. in some of us poetry is a continuum and it being broken up in chunks merely a convention ( sez he pompously)... anyhow, 8 for now and will return to it later
Re: Prologue by Dovina	PodPoet 68.107.89.26	21-Oct-06/10:57 AM
Haha this is humorous and thoughtful. A poet's poem. Nice work.
Re: Prologue by Dovina	Ranger 62.252.32.15	21-Oct-06/5:23 PM
Excellent, D. I think this could be read as a monologue (referencing back to the title) wherein the poet is arguing with him/herself, or it could be an exchange between two. Do you know, if half the people on All Poetry took this view, the amount of poems online would be reduced by a massive percentage?
Re: Canada by PodPoet	Ranger 62.252.32.15	21-Oct-06/5:40 PM
You're not from Canada, I see. Check out the Arrogant Worms' self-penned national anthem, 'Canada's Really Big'.