Tintagiles
on some deleted poem
20 Jan 2003, 4:56 AM
Ah. Yes. As you said, better. Still and again, change line 6. Liked your idea for it -- the name should be a two syllable one, that line really needs eleven feet as opposed to the niine it has. It really breaks the flow as it is. But then you know that...
No
nice. check out my response to you on my poem. well I don't rate stuff that strikes close to home...
Twould be better if it included smurfs
Dare I ask what about Ethiopian cuisine makes you go hmm?
The old albatross
will cover thousands of miles,
For fish for its chick.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
20 Jan 2003, 2:57 AM
Oh, the memories have just come flooding back...Liu Kang's bicycle kick, Scorpion's flame grilled fatality,the impaling pit...FINISH HIM!!! ahem.Killer instinct was a better game.
the first is George Bush, the second is Osama Bin Ladin??I give up, its just too hard.(!)guffaw!
You sick twat.
You see, youre not actually joking and your real hobby is knitting. Your a full time paedophile arn't you?
I bet you take it all u like bobjim, you dirty paedo
Hmm, your obsession with bumlove is a bit, well, obsessive you sick freak. I bet you wear tracksuits not for comfort but easy hand acssess.
Deserves an 8 just for the Jools Holland reference
Good, but im afraid it wont surpass your smurf poems
A blistering return to form!
perhaps whim should have been somewhere
Oh yes.
That's just nitpicking. I love this.
PCs have better games. HALF-LIFE IS STILL THE BEST GAME EVER!!!