Weird science shit is always enjoyable.

Clean and poignant. the title could be stronger like Burnt rubber, or Profilactic re-enactment. nah, it's fine.

Do you have this recorded? I think this poem went crash, boom, bam as well. It's average...a bit cheezy too...5

I here...should be I hear. Since I know nothing about drugs first hand...I won't even comment. I wept like a fool at the sight of a crack head in front of 7/11....perhaps there is such a thing as too innocent.

I like this alot especially the chorus, but you knew that already. The song is quite nice. Hmmmmmm....someone gave you a one...shame really....here's a 9.

Every time, I read it I think it's about me....and I guess that's what poetry is about....but since you claim it is not...instead of a 10...here's a 9.

DA in his Lazy Boy...nude and oiled....Hahaaaaaa....I can just imagine it an overweight Physics grad student from Cambridge...spitting out Physics theory as he rocks in the Lazy Boy back and forth. This should be the official Poemranker anthem...7

dendritic, doppelganger...going to my dictionary....must you use Webster on me? Other than that a fine capture of raw emotion...9

Very nice. Cool images there. Very real.

very nice.

I especially enjoyed the ending.

My favorite by far....we have the mom, the dad, and me? How did I earn the honor of being one of the people that turned you into Hamlet...and yes you're the common denominator. Here's an 8.

Intresting piece indeed, a bit too long but intresting nevertheless. Wasn't it you that said we should only write from experience? So, are you saying that watching the Discover Channel is like actually going to Africa and observing the animals?

at least you're truthful...but no Aspen or gym membership...more like $80....for being honest here is a 7. But if you need a gym membership I can perhaps give you one...perhaps.

I'm not getting the connection bn. the last line and the other two...Eyes bigger than mouth? It follows....5/7/5 and I love Tom and Jerry...6

Doctor, doctor keep him alive. would work better with"". who shot/ would look great with a has inbetween them, otherwise a lovely piece.

Okay, I read this twice, and I don't really get it...but then again when you use phrases such as Sprachenpuante of emorraggia....I have to now go and look it up...damn...this is turning out to be way too educational....when you were writing this did you see yourself as actually rhyming out loud? Yes, Eminem meets Al Sharp. Intresting, indeed...I shall read it again tomorrow. Maybe a few hours of sleep would give me more brain power.and then I'll vote..controparti?

Put a bandana on the dog....hahhaaaaaa...poor dog is now officially knighted a St. Monica Prince....all the beautiful fags at the gym wear bandanas...back to your poem..... I like it because it's simple. In most of your other work you seem to layer way too much. Your poems are unraveled by people like z and perhaps da, but they are not accessible to the masses...and ultimately don't you want your poetry to speak to people? Yes...9

To prove i am here for the poetry. only. Des, in all honesty, you're much better at spending money then writing poetry, but i'm sure you knew that, and it's no water of your back. Even Muti's poetry is scorching better than this husk exoskeletoned denial. I could edit it for you. that is if you'd like.

so John is you, correct? Yes, poor bastard.