Solid enough.

You also have a poem called "overweight." Are you fat? I weigh 316 pounds and have to buy two seats when I fly American Airlines. Anyway, I like the title and was excited to read the poem, but was a bit disappointed how you used the extended metaphor. So much for bringing expectations to something.

Big Time excitement for all ages here. lol.

I like the midget. keep him. and the rest too.

We are gathered here today to lay to rest the last mortal remains of the English language. It was brutally murdered by an assailant known only as "crazybeautiful".... "Eat 2 stay alive"? That's soooo profound!11 I thought I was eating to provide entertainment to others!

Is that a new title? The first line makes me think of John Lennon singing "So this is Christmas".. La de da.

Have you read "Grendal" by John Gardner?

"To" should be "too" in two cases! What did they teach you in primary over there?

This is +4 rockin'. Best Grendel poems ever.

Angsty? 'zat you? Angsty mcAngst from Zealand? if you had said so earlier, I'd have shown you my bra far sooner.

10

ACE TO THE MAX

An 8. Then a 2. Then a 7. Then a......? ================ I have to agree sometimes emotional spontaneous combustion can make good poetry. This site is has some pretty diverse writers mostly unique in there own way. I love everybody because like cheap plonk I am easily accessible and chilled, normally spat out instead of being consumed, but then again I'm from the rough part of town and rough diamonds are precious this may be rough in parts but I think precious. Sweet Dreams commentmeisters ~7~

Nice to see an intelligent american who speaks without apology for his beliefs, Bush thought yugoslavia was a car skoda made, its only one mans opinion, and one mans opinion is what democracy is about. Its always difficult to vote on these pieces but Bachus carry on taking no prisoners theres too much bullshit in this world this is escapism like it or bike it. ###8

You got used because you're a foolish little girl whose definition of love means he takes you out to McDonald's and if he supersizes your fries, you'll swallow.Learn to spell, you illiterate dunce. Your rhyme schemes are extremely childish and the subject has been done to death and back. PUT DOWN THE BASEBALL BAT AND BACK AWAY FROM THE DEAD HORSE IMMEDIATELY! god bless you. right in the ass, baby.

Get out of the suburbs, bratling. Realize that there are people who actually suffer in this world. Acquire perspective. Acquire zeros in bright emerald flocks!

crap

oh, this makes my bones ache. very nice. 9 swastikas!

Fix the spacing. Then I will read it.

You're -=Dark_Angel=- playing a joke on us, aren't you? Aren't you?