Jeremi B. Handrinos
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2003, 3:36 PM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
you fail
lol. that's good crack huh/
my favorite part was when my eyes stopped bleeding. or when it ended. both were kinda stimulating, tho
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2003, 4:00 PM
dog. suck it.
Very good, but please correct 'beastiality' to 'bestiality'. You must realise it's not even a pun, since they're derived from the same root.
Wow. Obscure, but ...brilliant? There is something here...You mad poet you 123456789strong.
Simple enough and fine I suppose.
Good for you Mr H. Nice and slow, take your time.
The best thing about this poem is the title (by the way i found"rhyms" this typo in your writer's info above) once again, super title.
I want that shirt. I have little hairclips that say "stop reading me" that confuse people. I want some raw fish with wasabi. There are no decent sushi places within less than at least a 4 hour drive of here.
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The "wearing only chastity" should be before the horse, i think. Godiva wasn't supposed to be seen. People were in their houses with shutters closed, etc. From the accounts I heard, the guy who did look was blinded. There you go. i think.
I believe this is the 22nd poeme on poemeranker to be -=Dark_Angel=--related.
2 wordy but acceptable!
sick and twisted.. what is your obsession with the abnormal???
You need serious help
this poem isn't worth the time and effort you spent to think up....
an moral impression of wasted space
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2003, 2:57 PM
no comment except it sucks to be you.....
yuck mouth!
Almost a laiason.
ha!